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Hello. I would love some feedback and opinions on these two logo refinements. The colors are not set, so those are open to change, but I questioning the layout of the type next to the logo.
The logo is set. The type face is as well.
Thank you for your feedback! :)
I think the top blue thread should be a bit tighter-in. What is the target audience? ’Coz that typeface makes me think of McCall’s sewing patterns.
I'm sorry Robert, but this is absolutely brutal.
- It looks like it was done in 15 seconds.non
- wow. why do u post such negative shit. use ur time more wisely.roberthuston
- He wasn't wasting time. Maybe this is how he feels. Don't see the actual insult.VectorMasked
- You asked for an opinion. You got it. I am not going to sugar coat it.non
I kind of have to agree with non, you might want to restart.
So when you say “The logo is set. The type face is as well.” do you mean you can only tweak what is already in place?
yup. I was trying to get opinion on which type orientation was better.
You could try and do something with the threads, like incorporate the E and T initials into the weave, and maybe get some dimensionality happening.
Maybe by making the threads the same line-weight as your font? The 't' could easily be incorporated into one of the threads if you wanted.
can't quite understand why you ask for opinion with so much limitations.
the typeface and color palette do not seem to be hitting the mark
Reminds me of something you'd see at TJ Max or other stores I try to avoid but sometimes get dragged to by various women.
this feels like it's for maxi pads or something.
and i'm usually nice on logo critiques.
Characters are too close together. You are having problems mostly with the e, a and s due their roundness.
The threads are what mostly need work. You could almost create a work of art if you could make them slightly more lively and realistic without making them the exact same width from one edge to the other.
Sorry, roberthurston, I don’t think anyone is trying to be critical here, I think there is a lot of potential if you can get the “stakeholders” to give you a chance to unlock it. I trust you have the skillZ.
Alright, alot to go on. Thanks everyone for ur input.
...May the skillZ be with you...
different font, and that looks more like basket weaving than a thread. Thread is super thin.
Agree with brains and non, this is simply not good. At the risk of sounding harsh, I would start over. The concept is lazy and the typography is poor. The kerning in particular is all wrong.
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