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- rybo0
the web stuff is great maybe the logos are too small make them bigger?
- hallelujah0
v. nice site structure/design... the dot letterforms look slightly awkward to me... such a variety of work it's hard to make it hold together as a graphic artifact without looking sloppy...
- but I always think that about portfolios with websiteshallelujah
- piperboytoy0
thanks for all your great feedback!! much appreciated
- arthur0
great to see you edvin! site's looking stellar.
- ml10
wow..for such diversity it seems to flow quite well...
are you freelance?
I'm a photographer who is new to SF....always down for a collaboration- Hey Welcome to SF. I just moved here last June. So far it's good but kind of cold. no full time. yeah i love to do some collab work too. I am aiming to do more arts related work rather than agency.
Thanks. i try to have a style but not everything works out. haha
piperboytoy
- Hey Welcome to SF. I just moved here last June. So far it's good but kind of cold. no full time. yeah i love to do some collab work too. I am aiming to do more arts related work rather than agency.
- fodcj0
Some good work. Especially like the Nice site design and the pin badges image :)
- Vicentvangogh0
Nice work.
The blog style design of the website is so over, redesign the site.
- akrokdesign0
nice work, edvin.
and keep the best bits up, and drop the rest.
- piperboytoy0
thanks all for your response. i will take everything into consideration, i will probably redo everything when i have time.
- Nairn0
Like neue says, that header section is gorgeous.
Like Jersey says - less work might be more.
Like Ian says - links might be a bit inscrutableLike Nairn says - I dislike the "Have done branding.." sub header text - that doesn't read well - "who or what have?". Also, I find the "made in Canada" thing distracting - you're based in California, right? Where are your clients expecting you to be from? I wish there was a bit more to the footer - even if it is just a duplication, content-wise, of what you have at the top. I'd drop those Nike concept visuals as well - sorry, I think they look quite amateur and don't (at first glance) appear to bear any relation to the site itself. You don't have a photo of the Visa Signature lounge snow thing to use? It's a bit hard to appreciate in its flat, illustrated form.
Good job, man.
- great feedback, thanks. i'll definitely make some changes.
I don't have any shots of the visa thing. i went home for xmas and never go to see it at westfield. i do have a few shots of it in our office but they were taken with my crappy iiphone camera. :(piperboytoy - Disagree about the Nike comment. Leave it in, CD's shit themselves over anything Nike.Andrew_D
- great feedback, thanks. i'll definitely make some changes.
- adamrobertson0
I like it. Good site, good work, and you're from Canada.
- JerseyRaindog0
I like the structure Edvin - good approach to whole one page folio thing. I do think there maybe too much work in there though. Sometimes less is more yaddah yaddah yaddah...