portfolio review
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- Nairn0
Like neue says, that header section is gorgeous.
Like Jersey says - less work might be more.
Like Ian says - links might be a bit inscrutableLike Nairn says - I dislike the "Have done branding.." sub header text - that doesn't read well - "who or what have?". Also, I find the "made in Canada" thing distracting - you're based in California, right? Where are your clients expecting you to be from? I wish there was a bit more to the footer - even if it is just a duplication, content-wise, of what you have at the top. I'd drop those Nike concept visuals as well - sorry, I think they look quite amateur and don't (at first glance) appear to bear any relation to the site itself. You don't have a photo of the Visa Signature lounge snow thing to use? It's a bit hard to appreciate in its flat, illustrated form.
Good job, man.
- great feedback, thanks. i'll definitely make some changes.
I don't have any shots of the visa thing. i went home for xmas and never go to see it at westfield. i do have a few shots of it in our office but they were taken with my crappy iiphone camera. :(piperboytoy - Disagree about the Nike comment. Leave it in, CD's shit themselves over anything Nike.Andrew_D
- great feedback, thanks. i'll definitely make some changes.