Logo Crit
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- erikjonsson0
second one is awesome. with some more color too it or just higher contrasted shapes. could be super
- WhiteFace0
- now you bold the thing, unless they drive hummers and are only men.akrokdesign
- have you been to Yorkshire??WhiteFace
- KERNdirtydesign
- hah. no. but isn't that where the british celebrity lives.akrokdesign
- you've lost something with the new type.Jnr_Madison
- I agree with Jnr.moamoa
- roundabout0
Do you have any other design idea's for the logo. At the moment you only have one. I'm sure the client would like to see more?
- I have 3 all together, this and two (very different) ones. But this it the first one i've worked up.WhiteFace
- d_rek0
It's an interesting mark - I think it may be a little too abstract for a broad audience to be able to grasp. For something like this to work you would really have to give the logo some context. Also, the type does not feel terribly integrated with the logo at this point. I'd really be interested to see the other variations too.
- vcr0
i hate it
- gramme0
What moamoa said. Excellent concept, just tighten the execution. I prefer your original use of Fedra Light over Avant Garde or whatever. More elegant/refined. Or, if you don't mind using the most common sans typeface in use at the moment, try Gotham for a friendly yet geometric look that will compliment the strict geometry of the mark. Avenir could work well too.
- You know your fonts, thanks for this.WhiteFace
- yepJnr_Madison
- +avenird_rek
- Shepstar150
1st and agree with digdre and menos
- max_prophet0
reminds me of star wars