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- falguni
Just a little more feedback
www.falgunishah.com
- ukit0
Hi
- lvl_130
speed up all the animations. the layout is nice, but i'm still not a fan of those obscure thumbnails.
also when contact slides past work, mask it so you don't see the overlap in the words. super minor point, but it looks kind of sloppy.
- tenpointtwo0
Hey, I like your work, especially the packaging stuff, but as for you website, it seems very slow moving to me, and the thumbnails are too small. Maybe consider a different font and a darker color for it. The site just feels a little stale for my tastes.
- dog_opus0
Good, solid stuff there, falguni. I especially like the experimental typography.
- moamoa0
some very nice work!
I am just not a big fan from your logo... the g is a little hmmm.
and donĀ“t dig the thumbails.. they are small, so there is no need for them.
- skt0
same as it was last time you posted it isn't it?
- Soler0
really needs "next" button for getting through the work quickly, which is very nice work
- such0
I'm not crazy about the "g" in your logo. It looks out of place and too big. The site seems a bit slow and I don't like the little thumbnails. Nice work though, I'd show it off more.
- d_rek0
I love your work, i don't really see much changed over the last time I saw it. However, i'll offer up some feedback.
1) Splash still seems irrelevant only because it doesn't really hint at the type of interaction or layout once you're past that point. I understand it's teasing us with some work but all it does is makes me want to start going through it from that point.
2) Might want to consider the placement of your additional views for work (ie: 1,2,3,4 etc), it's kind of awkward to click on the work on the left and then drag your mouse across the screen to file through additional views. Keeping the navigation more clustered and tightly focused (ie: all on one side of the screen) will help users browse through your work more easily.
3) Still noticing some spelling and grammatical errors. I understand that english is probably not your native language but you should be able to find someone who will proofread all of your copy for you. This is especially important since you have quite a bit of copy.
4) I agree with moamoa and such on your logotype for your name - The 'g' sticks out because the stroke is wider than the rest of the letters of your name - try reducing the stroke accents of the g so that it is contiguous with the rest of the letters.
5) This is minor but the text doesn't seem to be as crisp as it could be for a flash piece. This could be due to several reasons but is most likely because your text boxes in flash are situated on values that are decimals and not whole numbers. For example , the X and Y value of your text box might be x: 34.234 y: 98.44. Try setting these to whole values ( x 34 y 98 ) and it should help.
6)That's it for now... I really love your identity work though!