work feedback
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- d_rek0
I love your work, i don't really see much changed over the last time I saw it. However, i'll offer up some feedback.
1) Splash still seems irrelevant only because it doesn't really hint at the type of interaction or layout once you're past that point. I understand it's teasing us with some work but all it does is makes me want to start going through it from that point.
2) Might want to consider the placement of your additional views for work (ie: 1,2,3,4 etc), it's kind of awkward to click on the work on the left and then drag your mouse across the screen to file through additional views. Keeping the navigation more clustered and tightly focused (ie: all on one side of the screen) will help users browse through your work more easily.
3) Still noticing some spelling and grammatical errors. I understand that english is probably not your native language but you should be able to find someone who will proofread all of your copy for you. This is especially important since you have quite a bit of copy.
4) I agree with moamoa and such on your logotype for your name - The 'g' sticks out because the stroke is wider than the rest of the letters of your name - try reducing the stroke accents of the g so that it is contiguous with the rest of the letters.
5) This is minor but the text doesn't seem to be as crisp as it could be for a flash piece. This could be due to several reasons but is most likely because your text boxes in flash are situated on values that are decimals and not whole numbers. For example , the X and Y value of your text box might be x: 34.234 y: 98.44. Try setting these to whole values ( x 34 y 98 ) and it should help.
6)That's it for now... I really love your identity work though!