Logo Crit

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  • Llyod0

    ahahahhahahaha this cracks me the hell up. reaching up, holding hands with parents. what a load of hooey.

    • i know - like seeing this logo is going to make a delinquent kid change their life aroundbulletfactory
  • MHDC0

    tie more things together. It's busy. The "T" in seventeenth and the scale as one design element. Already looks like a T

    • what a horrendous idea!! sorry, but don't you think there's enough going on already without you picking out a completely unimportant / insignificant letter and highlighting it!?!?josimar
    • ... completely unimportant / insignificant letter and highlighting it!?!?josimar
  • Point50

    When I first glanced at the logo I saw two football helmets for some odd reason. I see exactly where the illo is going now, but first glance was kind of weird. I think your client is asking for way too much to be going on in a logo. This is like a diagram or something.

    • guess what I'm trying to say is try to simplify? easier said than done; based on your client's "wants" it's unpossible.Point5
  • bulletfactory

    Hey everyone -
    This project has been especially difficult. It's for a juvenile division of a judicial circuit.
    I started out designing more of an official looking seal, and stylized elements, but the client wasn't responsive. They wanted a more kid friendly approach. Main objectives were to show justice, kids, family, community. They required using scales, family, and kid reaching for a star. I would love some input - still tweaking on the kerning and not totally jazzed w/ the 'family' i've drawn. Thanks for any comments you may have!