Portfolio Site Crit
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- psv78
So, just launched, not completely finished and debugged, but ready for your welcome apreciation an crits. http://www.psv78.net . Thank you all.
- Jaline0
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- moamoa0
but those green splashes away....
- psv780
Does it take so much time??
- Jaline0
Decent work. Remove the paint splatter background.
- Jaline0
Also, automatically have the #1 piece of work loaded instead of a blank screen (when you click on either "Art Direction" or "Graphic Design")
- whiteout0
loaded for me, looks good
- saunakspace0
really like the work. Will agree with the splatter. It may not be necessary since overall the site has a clean presence.
- skt0
needs to be much cleaner to better suit the work displayed. lose the splatter and work on the type. it's all a bit clunky feeling.
also, when you go to a section, load in the first item of work.
- psv780
Working on loading the first piece of work!
Don't you think that if I loose the color splatte it will be too much minimalist?
And what about the work inside? Any more comments?
Thank you all again!
- moamoa0
you art direction jobs are good.. don´t know how much you directed but the result is good.
but why do you use this splatter? If its just there because otherwise it would be to minimalistic, remove it immediately.. its has no sense....
let ur work speak and not a splatter
- YAYPaul0
I'd try and speed up the initial loading time. The site took about 50 seconds to load, that's just long enough to get bored and close the window.
One thing you could try is loading each section of work once clicked on. Total loading times will stay the same, but the initial load will be much quicker helping people to stick around.Also what everyone else has said about showing the first image in each section automatically.
- JasonSack0
Your advertising/art direction work is ok, but the floor reflection in the VW Mirror ad (#8) is BAD.
Please, let's stop trying to replicate look. It never turns out good.
- psv780
any simple way to load each section indiviudually as YAYPaul said?
I'm not an actionscript expert...
Tks!- just load the swf's separatelysureshot
- http://www.kirupa.co…sureshot
- http://www.kirupa.co…sureshot
- senseg0
links in your about me section should be clickable
- matt310
load..... to long closed the window
- d_rek0
Just curious: Do people in advertising *really* think something will sell if you have a product shot with a small bit of copy?
- Iggyboo0
sorry too long to load dude and i got fios what the heck. compression :)
- b_electro0
Loading time is a bit long, even for an audience that will wait for Flash, i.e. other designers.
I'm guessing the splatter should suggest Action Painting/Pollock type dripping. Right now it suggests you kill animals, gut them, and hang them upside down to bleed to death.
Links that change copy on rollover aren't very useful to me- why bother saying the same thing 2 different ways?
The work itself is impressive- you're hired.