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- CamiloVelasquez
Check out my new site at www.camilovelasquez.com
Comments and sggestions are welcome!!
- PSYKHO0
You need to hide the text on the bottom, the site is nice by the way.
- What browser are you using?CamiloVelasquez
- FF 3.0PSYKHO
- same for me
showpony
- Doorman0
I like it all......would prefer to see the bottom bar on the right rather than the left...but otherwise fast and smooth...
- FallowDeer0
nice but kinda reminds me of a flash template that you buy?
- cuz it is.eegrek
- not that it's wrong, but you are right on the template.eegrek
- http://flashden.net/…
ewww.kingsteven
- moamoa0
use another font.
- ********0
Overall nice, I see alot of broken text on the bottom of screen, and I do not care for the generic video player plugin.
This is what I see: Direction and Cinematography by Camilo Velasquez - Official Website of Director/Cinematographer Camilo Velasquez Filmmaker - Miami, Florida Camilo Velasquez, official Camilo Velasquez site, Camilo Velasquez news, Juan Camilo Velasquez Elnesser, film director, commercial director, producer, propaganda films, vanity the movie, vanitythemovie, vanitythemovie.com, juanes, la historia de juan, aasha music, wode tian tian, marcos gutt, marcos gutt me ma me, camilo velasquez production updates, mario hernandez, mario hernandez backstage, andrea noceti, breast cancer foundation, urbana magazine, ocean drive, accessories and beyond, accessoriesbeyond.com, accessoriesbeyond, wgstudios, wg-studios, wg studios, wgstudios.com, urbana loft living, parclofts, antonio martinez ten confianza, antonio martinez, aasha wode tian tian, aasha zai wode xin zhong, MTV music videos, music videos, ten confianza, juanes un dia normal, camilo velasquez discussion forums, camilo velasquez news blog, camilo velasquez biography, camilo velasquez music videos, camilo velasquez ads, camilo velasquez commercials, camilo velasquez reel, CamiloVelasquez.com, videography, videographer, digital video, postproduction, video production, film, post-production, Web video, editing, visual effects, directing, music video, backstage video, Filmography, Awards, Camilo Velasquez Biography, Photography, photographer, director, filmmaker, producer, videographer, screenwriter, videography, digital video, digital cinema, postproduction, production, special fx, special effects, video effects, directing, music video,music videos, high definition, movies, films, feature film, actors, actresses, directors.
- X2 generic video player pluginmoldero
- How do you see this text? I don't see it on my browser....CamiloVelasquez
- x3Bluejam
- haha is it the 90'smodern
- moldero0
clean dude
- Bluejam0
i think your choice of typeface for the opening paragraph on the homepage could be better, on the dark background it's a pain to read, also is there any need for a scroll bar?
second, maybe it's my connection speed but the video delivery was awful, really slow and painful to watch/listen.
third, an image gallery is good but maybe some descriptions? otherwise, what am i looking at?
and lastly, the box animation makes it look a bit dated.
sorry for being harsh but honest.
- Nice note, I'll make some modifications and add descriptionsCamiloVelasquez
- PSYKHO0
I see the text in FF 3.0 on a PC, not sure if you see it on a Mac but you can just use CSS to hide the text.
Its right under the Flash movie.
- I don't even see the text in the code. How are you seeing it on screen.Mellimelvin
- PSYKHO0
Google might class the content on the bottom as a form of Spam so maybe write as it was a part of your site, maybe even use the text from your about page and use that and not the meta tags under the flash movie.
People used to do that back in the day to get high on the rankings but double Google looks at it as a good thing.
- ********0
Check out the bottom of the screenshot.
This what I see on two different Mac's, both running Safari 3.0.4 and Firefox.
- ahh, stuck in the quicksand, eh?23kon
- I just removed the textthat shlws on the bottomCamiloVelasquez
- < thank you, much better:)********
- ********0
Is that a sneaky SEO trick you're playing down there? Slap a div around that set to hidden, or make the font size .01em or whatever.
You can't just leave that lying around.
scroll="no" is only recognised by Internet Exploder.
- meffid0
sggestions?!
Are you fucking kidding me? It's not like I ever made a typo, but lately QBN's content reminds me of somewhat smelly vaginal discharge.
Your work is nice, the subject matter is loads of tight plastic snatch that's been rejuvenated which always goes down a treat. They look 19 but are 49 and I have a stiff cock. In my book, well done I say.
- meffid0
You intro info is too long. I gave up after a sentence.
- showpony0
i have a large monitor, and the bottom nav was "below the fold". i thought that your site was just the scroll text. you might want to consider bringing the nav to the top to fix this. also, it seems that you have some pretty nice photos/stills. perhaps you should pull some of those full screen behind your intro scroll box to make the site feel a little more custom.
- showpony0
another thought... you could add some javascript that tests the window size and then have that speak back to your swf and have a message that requests that the user makes their window larger. don't automatically resize people's windows though. you'll get hate mail. promise ;)
- CamiloVelasquez0
Anybody have some ideas for Google & SEO on Flash sites?
- such0
I'd change the type on your opening paragraph. I think it's hard to read. I don't like all caps, especially when it's small. Also, I would rewrite the opening.
- mdilone0
I'll be honest and I hope you find my input helpful.
I think your design could be stronger.Here are my thoughts.
* Is it necessary to spell out your URL (camilovelazquez.com)
i think it'd make more sense to come up with an actual logo, or stylized lock up for your title.* Change the font asap. It feels dated and techie.
* Kill the scrollbar. You have a large/full screen site with a short intro paragraph. Either cut back the intro copy or make your box bigger.
* The bouncing/expanding box animation also feels dated. It's Flash 101 (not in a good way).
* Branding for your site. Consider coming up with a solution where your name and lock-up are always visible. Right now, once I get past the intro screen, I no longer know what time I'm on.
* Your navbar, I'm on a 24" screen and I had no idea where your navbar was... It's okay for it be on the bottom, but it blended so much with your black background that it almost felt like it was copyright , legal disclaimer text.
Your creative work is very solid, your web site needs a little work.
Good luck with everything.
- I am working on the logo and used that as placeholder, will also test the font changes, thank you for the great input, highly appreciated!CamiloVelasquez
- dsgnr0
I like the dramatic change in the beginning.
maybe nice if I could change to white myself.
like the site simplistic well done.ooh good practice of changing look and feel black to white and reverse http://www.mutabor.de/#/de/white… drag the switcher upper right