Logo Critique
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- hektor911
OK guys this is the first time I've done this and probably the last. Kind of nervous...
This project is for a new product to be distributed in hotel chains, spas and other related stores...Thank you for your time!
- akrokdesign0
i think you should do some more explorations.
also you really should kern the letters.- stop posting and start running!!
;o)VectorMasked - HAHA. its 12:22am.akrokdesign
- don't matter dude.
ya need to train 2 beat me yo!VectorMasked - v, its not me who would beat you, its my team members. lol.akrokdesign
- :-Dakrokdesign
- stop posting and start running!!
- toe_knee0
can i haz teh nature
- VectorMasked0
1.- It reads... "eco...........................fibers"
'feel the nature' does not work well as you have it there.2.- Very unnecessary to have two leafs. One is enough at a small size to have some sort of hierarchy between the leaf and the text.
That leaf 'IS' from istockphoto, so try drawing one yourself.3.- weak type work. The image does not work well with the 2 lines of text.
Try pickin' another brown. Something a little more rich, coz right now it just reminds of diarrhea.
It's hard to suggest something coz we'd need to know whether the "eco" or the "fibers" is the keyword.
- don't mean to be rude btw. Just in case i came across that way.VectorMasked
- tis all bollocks.airey
- uncle_helv0
Personally I prefer the #2 as an overall marque, it feels the most like a logo, looks more crafted, the first one I don't like how the leaves break up the type, not a huge fan of the colours either the brown in particular!
The less said about the third one the better I think!
- uncle_helv0
Loose the strap line too, I find it is advertising agencies that always try shoe horn straplines into logos because branding is not their forte, but when they do attempt it they have to have airey, fairy lines hanging off it, maybe 'cause they have no confidence in just a logo, or they see things differently to designers?!
- phatlee0
Number 2, but like said someone said earlier, the leaves look like lettuce!!
- Dancer0
morning all
#2
The curls of the leaves need to be adjusted. they are uncomfortably tight to the word mark
- akrokdesign0
question is does "eco fibers" really need a mark? i would try to stay away from the leaf idea. look at eco stuff, they all have leafs.
- WeLoveNoise0
i like them all although i kinda more keen on the third one for some reason but would spent more time on the fibers type. texture is right but looks too condensed maybe
* also have u spelt fibers right ? i thought it was spelt FIBRES
- you are kidding, right?Dancer
- yes cos jokes like that r so funny
[prick]WeLoveNoise - Ooooooo someone's a little tired. No need to get all snappy with your prick comment.Dancer
- what u expect
u always got something condesending to sayWeLoveNoise - like what?Dancer
- hehe...jimzyk
- Dancer0
How is 3 ever going to be a workable logo?
Just because I disagreed with you, does mean you should get all abusive. I am sure others will agree that #3 is unworkable as a logo.Keep your prick comments to yourself WeLoveNoise
- crybabyWeLoveNoise
- hahaha
how old are you?Dancer - Ignore him Dancer he's probably only 18!uncle_helv
- I think we both guessed right!uncle_helv
- bothered !WeLoveNoise
- marindsgn0
the first one but be careful with the Kerning !!!
try another colors, 2 Pantones is enough
- WeLoveNoise0
your right 3 wont really work but that wasnt the question was it - it was which one do i prefer ?
- remember the world dont evolve round the alistair dance wayWeLoveNoise
- Dick!uncle_helv
- who ever said it did? Shit you have a real bee in your bonnet this morningDancer
- whatever - who the fuck was talking to u anywayWeLoveNoise
- ********0
I'd say number 2, but remove the bottom leaf, then with the top one, reflect it so it's facing the other way, make it smaller so it fits above the back half of the b and over the ers if that makes sense. You also need to track the 'bers' slightly tighter in.
And 'feel the nature' is not correct, it would have to be 'feel nature'.
If you end up using the strap on this one you should look at using a serif typeface or a lighter version of the logo type, which I believe is FS Albert.
- monospaced0
Keep working. Those look like your first three tries, and are exactly what you'd expect from any eco company. Not trying to be harsh, just trying to inspire you to be original.
- yes this are actually my first ones.... thanks averyone there are some great comments!hektor911
- ********0
have you tried doing anything with fibres?
at the moment it looks like you have just gone, hmmmm, nature, i know, leaves.
- Haydesign0
Number 2 all day long! With darker brown.
- Jnr_Madison0
Has to be number 2 but needs refined.