logo input please
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- szymon_k
started working on this and just want some input about the direction im going in.
What you all think.
- locustsloth0
What's it for? Nearly everything looks good to me (including this) until i understand the context in which it's being used
- forcetwelve0
i think you could run into trouble with that texture on the 12. like what happens when it's smaller than that... it could go pear shaped.
and tell me you're not working in photoshop?!
- no photoshop for this guy. its in illy
szymon_k - sweetforcetwelve
- no photoshop for this guy. its in illy
- mg330
Rather illegible and just all around odd - in or out of context.
- brains0
the "12" looks way too stylistically pulled away from thirtee, which in it's own right should probably not include the gradient. This logo should be just as strong when simply black and white, solid colors as it does touched up later with gradients etc.
- szymon_k0
Thinking about blog/portfolio site. Its pretty much a play on the house numbers of of where i dwell.
- horton0
very confusing. may not be your fault but is it;
thirteen-twelve?
thirtee-twelve?
thirtee-one-two?as already mentioned, legibility and reproduction is gonna be poor.
- forcetwelve0
lose the gradients
- horton0
first thing i see is "tee" which makes me think distressed-logo tshirt company.
- ukit0
Think simpler - much simpler. There are two ideas there (grungy texture and stretched type) that don't go together. I'd pick either one or the other to pursue.
- szymon_k0
What about the second one??
- brains0
I'd say don't mess with your weights, it's a split up enough style having the stretched type. Keep the 12 the same weight as the rest of it.
- forcetwelve0
yeah i agree. make the 12 the same size and weight - maybe just have it in a stroke - not filled.
- digdre0
make the 'i' normal.. no?
- sublocked0
its like a paint drip, but not.
- avolve0
Im just going to be honest and say that I think its really really shit, the drips look pretty horrible and the heavier '12' just looks odd.
- doesnotexist0
looks very much like that muller (sp?) logo and somewhat similar to Crouwel's mark.
I would start over.
- stoplying0
I personally don't like the drips coming down. They don't serve a purpose and make it hard to read. If it's your address/residence try incorporating a house or something into it.
- organic_grid0
The paint drip effect is actually growing on me. I would shorten the drips in the "h" "i" "r".
- 5timuli0
Thirtee12 is more like 13-12 than 30-12.