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• OSFA

  Here's a new idea I'm working on, what do y'all think? Comments and suggestions are welcomed...

  

  http://www.osfaland.com/

  PS. I'm still working on it, hnce the hosting...

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  18000!!

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  • but its no blog
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• harlequino0

  wuzzit? folio site?

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• moamoa0

  could be a better kerning...
  and no gradient, please...

  the sf solution isn´t perfect yet

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  • just talking about the logo :)moamoa

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• drgs0

  i think of a scene from 'the shining'
  creepy

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  • I know. I am creeped out.Jaline

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• 7point340

  reminds me of this
  

  

  what's it for?

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  • same thoughtismith

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• OSFA0

  personal site, work, rants, etc...

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  • that's what QBN is forAmpersanderson

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• cosmicEntity0

  I really like the top banner: "Turbo Charged Web Hosting!" impressive

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  • hahaha!OSFA

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  Must be pretty prestigious if all those white men ages 18-60 are in it.

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  • the skulls 51st annual roast7point34
  • you bet!OSFA

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• harlequino0

  I love the image. I hope you continue that sepia barbershop aesthetic throughout. Big moustaches. Really. Big. Moustaches.

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  • osfache.com7point34

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• ian0

  I quite like the typeface but it reads awkwardly to me, like o sf aland, I think its the spacing and how the 'aland' is joined up. Its a good start.

  But that being said, I am not taking part in another dream-bashing crit today, nosir, you're not getting me that easy!

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  • yup, I know what u mean, working on that..OSFA

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• kelpie0

  surely with your photoshop skills you could put your face on every one of those gentlemen. That would rock.

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  • hahaha I was thinking on placing it in just one a la Waldo...OSFA
  • I think you'd kind of stick out there Diego.
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  • hahaha!OSFA

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• OSFA0

  Quick question moamoa, do you have any suggestions for the sf treatment? Thanks!

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• utopian0

  Looks too Web 2.0

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  • The logo that is.utopian
  • Focus more detail on "OSFA" less on the "land"utopian

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• emukid0

  in the greater scheme of things, what difference does it make whether i like your design?

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  • believe it or not brotha, it means a lot... ;)
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  • i was just trying to annoy janne. i like the logo and suggest what the guy below suggested.emukid

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• Ampersanderson0

  I like it, but that logo needs a good dose of kerning. "aland" should spatially match the "sf" ligature

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  • agreed
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• fyoucher10

  Make it bigger!

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• creative-0

  I'm disappointed that when I turn it 90° it doesn't look like a dude knocking one off

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  • which side did you turn it on... i can see the O as ahead and the d as feet... f as arms and well... yeah7point34
  • haha!OSFA

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• OSFA0

  I did a few adjustments, better?

  

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  • works for me... i like7point34
  • Me too - though it's a shame there isn't some flourish towards the end of the mark to balance out..detritus

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• dbloc0

  what's the confidential stamp for? texture?

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• dbloc0

  also what's under the image? is that a reflection?

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