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- _salisae_0
the O looks like it could be tapped in just a hair. and the space btwn. the a and the n is a little too tight because of the serif bridging the gap. looks beautiful otherwise.
- i_monk0
Maybe it's the connectivity of 'aland' but it seems kerned too tightly compared to the 'Osfa' part.
- creative-0
How about
- DoubleKing0
the a-l and a-n still need a little keming love. and perhaps the l-a depending on how the rest washes out.
- Jaline0
Nice job, but I don't know if I like that one size fits all. I need to be able to shrink it at least a bit.
- size queen.DoubleKing
- I know, it's probably too much to ask. I hope your land has candy, at the very least.Jaline
- threadpost0
I quite like the sf ligature thingy. I have a hard time pronouncing it, but that has nothing to do with the legibility or type/gradient/kern etc. The tracking on the aland seems a little tight, but totally readable.
- iandl0
a+n are too close.
- Llyod0
shining for sure
- Llyod0
or the shinning
- TREBIO0
those guys need random thought bubbles. maybe as rollovers.
and thanks for not doing a 2.0 reflective on the logo. (that wasn't invented until 1935)
- sputnik20
that whole "aland" area needs more kerning space
- OSFA0
Of course it'll have candy jaline!
- 2cents0
What typeface are you using?
- ********0
looks like this
- moamoa0
kerning is better now..
the ligature doesn´t make sense to me in this case