my work (yet another thread)
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- jayr
long time reader, first time poster.
i've just updated my site and invite any comments and/or criticism (even an entire page worth of bullshit, which i am likely to gather like all posts do).
the goal is to move to ny/sf/japan/europe.
- OnesandZeros0
nice work & portfolio page!
- jayr0
thanks
- vrmbr0
ny/sf/japan/europe.
all at once?- he may be spreading himself a little too thin. :)bulletfactory
- Llyod0
it'll probably be difficult to get a japan if you don't have any japanese in your portfolio
- vrmbr0
at least you are better than me.
but that is not really much of a compliment i am afraid.
- jayr0
@ lloyd: very true, i have some projects, but it isn't as extensive or on par with what i have on my site now so i am hesitant to post it. japan is more like a pipedream for me and design, unfortunately...
@ vrmbr: if i could go everywhere, i would! i am in baltimore now, and would welcome some new territory to explore. those happen to be my top choices for now.
- it wold be a pain in the ass for them to hold your hand whenever you lay out typeLlyod
- jayr0
@ daro: thanks
- doesnotexist0
i would move the about info somewhere else. focus should be on that list of work! the strike-through on visited links doesn't work imo.
- brianbrooks0
I graduated from MICA 5 years ago....how's Bernard?
- jayr0
yeah, i was thinking about that to. maybe going to move that to the main page instead. re: strike-through, it may be a bit contrived...overly stylistic?
- yeah, i would just gray the links out with the same style for visited. keep it simple.doesnotexist
- done and done, thanks for that commentjayr
- drgs0
i liked gallivant nouveau identity
- utopian0
A little constructive critique on your resume...
Jay,
Above "EDUCATION" you should add "OBJECTIVE". Add a sentence or two about your creative and career objectives. This will give some character and depth to your resume and help you stand out among the endless pool of resumes, good luck.
BTW - Nice work Jay
- VectorMasked0
is cement the new wood?
:p
Site and work is ok. Just installed the screen saver ;o)
- effort0
nice work. sf is great. tons of work out here (especially interactive).
send me an email if you want to talk details.
- haiminh0
Your CV and work in general looks great - good luck on the jobhunt. :)