T shirt critique
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- cornflake
Hey, just looking for some input on a design I am planning on submitting to threadless. thanks.
- epigraph0
Sorry, but that is not very well executed. The idea is ok though.
It is very confusing visually, and I don't understand the white piece.
on something as simple as this, it has got to look right from an anatomical standpoint, or it looks like a kid did it.
- Meeklo0
I like the idea, but when it comes down to a t-shirt, I have to like how it looks in order to wear it, good or bad idea it won't matter as long as I like how it looks. That being said, I don't like how your shirt looks. But that's personal opinion.. it does not mean that is bad.
- utopian0
I like the idea and the graphical symbol but the typeface looks like clip-art. New font please...
- ukit0
The concept is solid. Your execution is kind of sloppy, and the color scheme sucks. Redraw it and try a different color scheme.
- chossy0
dinae like it.
- drgs0
maybe a bolder type and space it closer to the hand
- cornflake0
Thanks for the input. I wasn't sure about the font either but i needed a font that allowed me to reverse the "v" to become an "n" in order to still keep the balence between the 2 words. Font suggestions are gladly welcome.
- SecretPenguin0
I dig it. The white space is the thumbnail, right? Makes sense to me.
Only suggestion I would have is to try to hand-draw that typeface. I like how the n and v are the same. Overall, good concept.
- cornflake0
and the white bit in the middle is suppose to be the thumbnail but maybe it is just confusing people.
- uncle_helv0
Hobo will never look good!
hand looks clumsy!
- skt0
pish
- contia10
Is their 6 fingers?
- marychain0
Looks a bit like a mechanical heart with a smokestack of some kind.
- marychain0
ohhhh...and HOBO? really
That's on the list of top 5 fonts to never use...right up there with comic sans, sand & papyrus
- Randd0
it's not like plenty of other hideous fonts haven't made a comeback
- Raniator0
that hand is weird.
- rtr0
use different stroke sizes. needs to be looser. seems too rigid
- cornflake0
Worked out a new version based on some suggestions. still looking for feedback. thanks