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- neue75_bold0
well done man... the simple site is great and needs nothing more...
Agree with what Nairn said though...
- kelpie0
move it up in the list then, peeps on here may disagree I don't know but for me it shows a very important thing; that you can reign in the funk a bit and produce high quality corporate work that still has style
- ephix0
your logo looks like that emil one
- http://emilkozak.com…
Not reallyConcrete - ha, that guy lives on the street I used to live onkelpie
- He has good stuff.
So do you, Concrete!Jaline
- http://emilkozak.com…
- ian0
Hey chief, bout time the site was ready! Really love the work and don't have a problem with the minimal layout, shows off the work well and allows it to be the focus.
For what it's worth I have a couple of suggestions:
1: On the Highgate page, I'd make the 1st pic the same height as the others (it drops just below the bottom of the pic on the right while everything else is aligned), just a niggly thing!2: Cascade & others, where you're showing a website design, perhaps a link to the site itself?
3: Parenta, love this page but the very 1st image is weaker (and slightly soft focus) compared to the others, I'd either drop this or move it to a different place and make another one more prominent as this is the 1st image you see on the spread.
4: agree with the rothko comments above, I'd drop till its ready to be unveiled.
5: Reeses Peanutbutter Cups are possibly the greatest confectionary ever.
Apart from that, well done, looks good and great work, best of luck with it!
- alla0
super nice work.
10/10
- uncle_helv0
solid work concrete!
- JerseyRaindog0
I can't find fault with anything. Except for the thing vague said about displaying websites on a mac pics. And holding posters.
But your work looks fresh, thoughtful, contemporary and I think there's a good cross section of off-the-wall and real world.
If I was hiring, and you lived in Jersey, I would hire you on the spot.
- phatlee0
I really like it, nice, clean and simple.
- BaskerviIle0
congrats, really nice, solid work. Lots of lovely little ideas hidden within lots of the work.
Just a personal thing, but I find it weird to see just a page of logos, since you almost never design JUST a logo, always good to see them in context i.e. branding rather than logos, but if you literally just did the logo then I guess that's cool.BTW, really like the Eastwell Press and Nursery Network logos, it shows that you haven't just had the idea but you've really finessed it and made it work visually too.
- 23kon0
nice work there mister and very unfusly showcased :)
- kinross0
I think all of it is amazing envy-inducing stuff.
My only suggestion would be on projects were you have done identity and all the applications, would be nice to see the identity on its own and then see the applications.
- Concrete0
Thanks, everyone. I really appreciate all your feedback and compliments, especially from really talented designers on here that I look up to (not mentioning any names.)
I'm going to make a few changes then sell my soul to some agencies.
- Concrete0
Updated
:)
- ian0
Tight! And may I just say that the amplitude and nursery network logos are ace, really cool stuff!
- utopian0
Really nice work, howver the website design looks like it was built with the generic web template software: http://www.indexhibit.org
- ender790
diggin' it. very nice work, concrete.
- fodcj0
Not working on my computer... I am using Safari!
- Concrete0
Is there a reason for that happening? (web n00b)
I have safari on a PC and it works fine here.