new logo, crit plz
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- digdre
made this new logo today
http://flickr.com/photos/tomhuve…
"FarbFest"self made 'font'
@tank,
Broos buiten ^^
:D
- non0
I can't read it.
- OSFA0
hmmmm the fact that you had to tell us the name before looking at it is not a good sign...
- skwiotsmith0
Things are working much better than before. If you are worried about legibility, it might be an issue, as the 'b' reads strangely. If you aren't worried about legibility, try creating a ligature to connect the 'r' and the 'b', or at the very least, clean up the ascender on the b, with the bottom of the stroke lining up with the top stroke of the r.
Also, tweak the 't' a bit. Feels lifeless and out of proportion to the other characters.
It's a good start. From here you basically need to subtly refine the characters. It may end up breaking your system a bit, but that's good.
What secondary face are you using as a compliment?
- digdre0
secondary face?
my piece of paper :p
thanks for comments, will tweak it tomorrow orso
- duckseason0
the E and S in fest are hard to read if you didnt know what it was saying already.
- digdre0
I gonna chane that E into the S, but rotated 90° CC
- neue75_bold0
I can't feel my hands...
- dbloc0
is it a civil war reenactment fest?
- dbloc0
try again.
- drgs0
i can read it , except letter n
- tank020
hej tom,
already a step forwards,
try now to bring some harmony in,
at the moment its a bit to chaotic..sjek the logo right above here,
see its kind of similar but there is more 'rust' in there...enja broos, tja moest gebeuren, maar hij kan er ni doen dat de spitsen ni scoren eh ;)
nooit gedacht dat ik hier op qbn over racing zou hebben...
- gramme0
Designer's Republic, ca. 1999.
- VectorMasked0
Earb
Ecnt?
- 7340
i cant make out the e and s at the bottom
turn the 's' you are currently using on its side to make the e
use the 'f' symbol to make the s. flip the bottom part of the 'f' to make it down and to the left
- gramme0
What I was getting at is that the style of the logo looks like something The Designer's Republic would've designed circa 1999. It looks outdated imho.
- trooper0
suzz dude... looks like tdr wannabe design!
- creative-0
Doesn't work for me I'm afraid. If you hadn't said I'd never have worked out it said "FarbFest". Keep it simple.
- neverblink0
I like it.. although it's a style that was used alot a couple of years ago.. if this is what you like - go with it!
See if you can find the old logo Martin Lorenz designed for his company: Two Points [ http://twopoints.net/ ]. (it's not on his current site, but it was very similar to your current design)
- chossy0
It looks nice but, I would have no idea what it read without having been told first, sometimes because your close to it you just force an imaginary legibility, I think this is the case here.