new logo, crit plz
new logo, crit plz
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- skwiotsmith0
Things are working much better than before. If you are worried about legibility, it might be an issue, as the 'b' reads strangely. If you aren't worried about legibility, try creating a ligature to connect the 'r' and the 'b', or at the very least, clean up the ascender on the b, with the bottom of the stroke lining up with the top stroke of the r.
Also, tweak the 't' a bit. Feels lifeless and out of proportion to the other characters.
It's a good start. From here you basically need to subtly refine the characters. It may end up breaking your system a bit, but that's good.
What secondary face are you using as a compliment?