My early website design
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- mickeybliss16
hi,
I've decided to redesign my website - heres my very first attempt at it, so please forgive any errors and non-browser friendliness, i know it doesn't work correctly in IE.the address is http://aesthetic-design.co.uk/pr…
obviously i've not included any work or anything yet, but basically the work will be displayed in those polaroids as well as more as i add more work.
thanks a lot for having a look, what do you think i can improve on?
- skt0
have you looked at it on Firefox on windows xp yet?
i suggest you do. the text is completely off the page.
- also, your copy is pretty poor.skt
- urm whats my copy?mickeybliss16
- mickeybliss160
could you post a screen shot for me?
- what resolution are you using? it works fine for me in FF on XP...mickeybliss16
- its not over the note page image.... its like 30-40px left of where it should be734
- same on safari
inhaler97
- robotron3k0
don't be too honest either. if you want a job, play hard to get.
- neue75_bold0
it's not right in Safari either...
- weestu0
it's off in IE 7 too. you might want to try this: http://browsershots.org/
- mickeybliss160
thanks a lot, but i did say "please forgive any errors and non-browser friendliness" ;)
- weestu0
sorry but apart fromt he errors and non-browser friendliness there's not much to comment on ;)
- flashbender0
You sound a bit soft soft in the copy - be more assertive and sell yourself better. Optimally that summary should say "I am the shit, give me a job!" but not in an arrogant way.
Lose the words like "try" and "believe" and re[place them with stronger words
- mickeybliss160
whats wrong with it in your IE?
- JerseyRaindog0
Not right in FF on mac osx leopard either.
- Anthony_Turner0
I really like this, well done 'mickeybliss16'. Looks like you have a lot of talent!
- uncle_helv0
"I believe that because life doesn't jump around all over the place nor should a website."
hahahahaha
- rough0
Text on both FF + IE on XP is off to the left, only just noticed the 'close' link which is white text on white background!
- ldww0
Why is there no html output in your source. Are you doing this all in javascript?
- flashbender0
here's how it displaye in IE6 ... the alignment issue is the same in FF - but at least the png is displayed properly in FF.
- uncle_helv0
Fouty is that you??
- haha... oh man.. that guy is gonna go kill a zoo or something.inhaler97
- kelpie0
ooo! I just found the other bit! - I think you really need to sort out the code so it works properly and includes all the content then come back with it. Its difficult to crit right now. good luck :D