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- ********
Please could you give me any critics of my latest work!
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- springbok0
I honestly thin this could be the best bit of design I have seen in a long while! I think its the gold grad in the background that does it.
- Cheers springbok, I used a grad (gradient) in photoshop to represent gold leaf********
- Cheers springbok, I used a grad (gradient) in photoshop to represent gold leaf
- ********0
Why have you spelt lager - larger ?
- good pint********
- why have you spelled "spelled" spelt?Point5
- good pint
- ********0
please tell me this is a joke.
- Wolfboy0
cooool, you can't beat a bit of design by client/account handler can you?
- creative-0
Um...
- slappy0
no no no.
- Fariska0
Clean it up visually too much noise.
The layout is quite ok. But the headline needs to be reworked, especially that dash at the end of the second line.The upper box looks like a webpage banner. Rework it and pay
attention to spacing.The pictures are really thrown there without care, decide a common size for them and dispose them using a grid. Or chose
maximum 2 different sizes for them and make something armonic
yet not static.And yeah, the background colour, that's the major problem.
If i were you i'd amend it very quickly and post an update here, before the hammering starts.
- Cool thanks for the advice, although its all a matter of opinion in the end - i think using the same shaped photos would be boring********
- Cool thanks for the advice, although its all a matter of opinion in the end - i think using the same shaped photos would be boring
- Raniator0
Do you know why there are designers in the world?
So you don't have to do it yourself.Your obviously proud of it, you should have just kept that to yourself and registered on some other website instead...
- ********0
It's was nice of you to let your client help you. Sweet.
- Cheers! Thats how Ive always worked.********
- collaboration and they paid you? high five.********
- Cheers! Thats how Ive always worked.
- WeLoveNoise0
F*ck me, looks like someone did a shit on the page
- Are you talking about my design or the comments?********
- Are you talking about my design or the comments?
- tank020
make the background white,
and put the text in colour,
thats ginna give the page more balance.btw
love the immature comments here again...
designer are a bunch of arrogant twats...- Thanks tank02 - but the gold really works I think - defo change the color of the text though!********
- how is the gold being printed..
cmyk gold always looks shit printed, only works with foil..tank02 - what tank said. let the market or ambition or taste dictate the succes of your choice, not..>********
- the bloody arrogance of other designers.********
- Thanks tank02 - but the gold really works I think - defo change the color of the text though!
- ********0
Bloody hell, hahahahaah
- joqui0
is this for real?
- creative-0
It's downhill from here...
- honest0
Those bars could just be in the same country no? Why only beaches since you say "best bars in the world"
- neue75_bold0
My only comment would be to point out that banner ad's with top page placement haven't proven overly effective in print...
