Business card crit
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- Dancer0
your such a moaning bitch helv
- uncle_helv0
Yep give me a reason and I'll moan, worringly my latest winter fashion purchase was a corduroy flat cap, although the more I'm thinking about it I'm turning into...
I DON'T BELIEVE IT!
- bulletfactory0
my xmas card is better
mimeartist
(Nov 8 07, 03:43)-----------------------------
can we get a preview?!?
- gramme0
I too think Dancer's fave is more much compelling and elegant. HOWEVER: ditch the lining figures and use oldstyle figures for your numbers. If the typeface doesn't have OSF, then find one that does. Old-style figures (where the numbers sit up or down on the baseline to create an even texture in lines of type) are much more elegant.
I honestly don't think there is anything worth keeping in the "final" design. Bad kerning, bad leading, bad hierarchy, poor font choice for the size. Hope that isn't too harsh.
- tank020
its not harsh, gramma
its good to point stuff out like this, no?we all learn everyday ;)