Business card crit
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- Andys81
My new business card design for you all to look at, any comments would be most welcome, thanks in advance.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/725…
Andy
- ********0
I almost like it.
- phatlee0
your kerning needs looking at.
- Dancer0
prefer these:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/725…
- tank020
kerning is horrible man but globally its ok..but watch out with the thin lines...especially when they are tilted, could be printed out wrong..check your printer for specs and run a test first...
- tank020
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prefer these:
www.flickr.com/photos/...
Dancer
(Nov 8 07, 02:second that.
- ********0
didn't he present the second one back last year? and everyone laid into it :)
how times change..
1 - take care of kerning
2 - take care of >LEADING< (some of it is good, other bits are kinda awkwardly wrong.
- uncle_helv0
Don't fall foul of fashion!
Expensive game re-doing your stationery every month!Don't like it! it takes 3 lines copy before or I find out your name, (I was taught that business cards are a handshake) plus for me that print test logo doesn't work, just looks bad!
That said it's all subjective init!
- tank0
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Don't fall foul of fashion!
Expensive game re-doing your stationery every month!Don't like it! it takes 3 lines copy before or I find out your name, (I was taught that business cards are a handshake) plus for me that print test logo doesn't work, just looks bad!
That said it's all subjective init!
uncle_helvactually not subjective,
de kerning errors,...
is a very big fault, it shows a lack of craftmenship, as is said..
the base is good, but now you have to be designers and get the faults out...-
- clerk0
not a big fan of negative leading here.
- kelpie0
agreed about the leading, it could do with being opened up a bit and evened out. I'd move the number to the left slightly so it breaks the line a little too, like the G in graphic...
- uncle_helv0
I meant the style of the card tank!
I'd rather you didn't patronize me!
- ********0
Funny that you say business cards are a hand shake... I've just started doing mine...
Still artworking it before you say the lines are shaky :)
- uncle_helv0
Haha nice, I like how your logo uses no words, clever!
- ********0
my xmas card is better
- emecks0
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prefer these:
www.flickr.com/photo s/...
Dancer
(Nov 8 07, 02:second that.
tank02
(Nov 8 07, 02:20)third it.
- Dancer0
Nice mime.
The options are endless...
You an illustrator as well?
- ********0
before i got into web sites, yes.
- tank020
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Haha nice, I like how your logo uses no words, clever!
uncle_helv
(Nov 8 07, 03:39)not my intention helv,
always value your opinion...sorry if it came over wrong...
- tank020
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I meant the style of the card tank!
I'd rather you didn't patronize me!
uncle_helv
(Nov 8 07, 03:08)not my intention helv,
always value your opinion...sorry if it came over wrong...
- uncle_helv0
No worries mate, I was been a massive drama queen!
:)