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- defender0
2 and 5
- horton0
i like the direction of #2... and its almost starting to look like a ribbon/bow which could potentially be a really strong mark for a gift company if you made it work.
- Milan0
are they hot?
- k0na_an0k0
i really like #2.
I think the bottom of the pink S should be under the 3 though. Starting with the top tip of the S it goes over, under, over, over. I think the last one should be under. Right?
Really nice. You've come such a long way leftwave. You've become quite the designer. :)
- Antonelli0
-i think the first two are too cold.
-#4 looks like a religious logo.
-i like the feel of #5, but the "3" isn't obvious enough.
-maybe try something hand-written?
-take a look at the "sisters" logo my boss created... http://mcandrewkaps.com/
- horton0
i like the direction of #2... and its almost starting to look like a ribbon/bow which could potentially be a really strong mark for a gift company if you made it work.
horton
(Oct 12 07, 08:41)actually #1 might even work better as a bow.. ie:
- chossy0
1 and 2 I feel are the ones to develop more, I'm thinking smaller text in the name type.... good luck and good start.
ye dick.
- OSFA0
pics???
- mg330
I'm going to say 6.
2 is very stale... looks like something for a tech company.
If you were intertwining the 3 and S, get a little more creative with it. Maye another color, or some parts subtracted.
- leftwave0
man i love you guys. great feedback, and not too many hot sister jokes... thanks!
extra big thanks to kona too :)
OH... I'M ENGAGED!!!!!! anyone got any good wedding resource websites? i'm totally cluless when it comes to being a bride!
- capn_ron0
I like 5 and 6, i think they could easily be worked to tie in a ribbon or bow feeling. That would become a great mark.
- Stecchino0
You may have something with #2. I like the ribbon and bow ideas every one has. Work the 3S bow idea. Did you try 3S in the middle and the 2 words on either side? Keep sketching. It'll come out nice, I'm sure.
- leftwave0
how do you guys suggest working the bow/ribbon idea into these??
- Nairn0
I like Horton's suggestions.
Must admit, I'm not really liking any of these, I'm afraid, Leftwave.
I feel like you started thinking about this in illustrator, pulling whatever vaguely relevant fonts you had from your collection and putting them together with a couple of trite devices.
I'd turn off the computer, take a notepad and pen and have a walk around town, dig through some magazines, have a coffee and just mull over the ideas '3 sisters' and 'gift company' puts in mind. Draw them out, no matter how naff they might at first appear - once you've got a couple of pages of doodles, flesh them out, then go back to your computer.
Oh, congratulations on your engagement, by the way!
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- version30
i'd have to say no across the board. a little piece of me died when i saw #4
- TheBlueOne0
I liked 6 myself...
- Nairn0
veh cleveh, bulletfactory.
The other thing I meant to mention - the colour scheme is insipid.