Identity Portfolio (.pdf)
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- arseni
While my portfolio site is undertaking a major reconstruction, i put together a small pdf presentation of the identity works i've done. Something fast, clean and simple. Let me know what you think of this pdf, including the works themselves.
http://arseni.com/portfolio/iden…
Thanks!
- Gucci0
Hi arseni,
Don't take any of my comments personally, but here goes:
The whole thing feels a little slapped together. I know you said you wanted something quick, so maybe you were in a rush?
As for your layout: A few things bug me here. I think the spacing of your items is off (your logos appear to be too far to the left of the page) and the type seems a tad large.
I like your logo... it's interesting and demands attention - I just don't think it's best where it is and at the size it currently is. You could really make a statement on your coverpage and set the tone for the rest of the folio by simply resizing your logo and rethinking that page.
my 2 cents.
Hope I gave you another perspective.
- jaylarson0
it'd be nicer if the text on the right stayed in the same location
- arseni0
Guys,
Thanks a lot! You're totally right. I maybe spent like 20 minutes on this whole thing, just to answer one ad, to be honest :) And then for some reason i decided to get feedback on this... I'm sorry. I know it's not polished.But if you do like what's inside in terms of the content, then it means a lot more to me.
Cheers.
- meisterschueler0
i like the idea of the San Francisco coach thing logo