Identity Portfolio (.pdf)

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  • Gucci0

    Hi arseni,

    Don't take any of my comments personally, but here goes:

    The whole thing feels a little slapped together. I know you said you wanted something quick, so maybe you were in a rush?

    As for your layout: A few things bug me here. I think the spacing of your items is off (your logos appear to be too far to the left of the page) and the type seems a tad large.

    I like your logo... it's interesting and demands attention - I just don't think it's best where it is and at the size it currently is. You could really make a statement on your coverpage and set the tone for the rest of the folio by simply resizing your logo and rethinking that page.

    my 2 cents.
    Hope I gave you another perspective.

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