site crit please!
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- leftwave
i'm making a site for an educational tutoring company. client wants something super clean, simple and airy.
feedback please:
http://leftwave.com/indevelopmen…
- digilee0
shift it all up a bit.
too much space at the top.Needs more work, but generally, it's getting there.
If you're going to stick with this layout I would shift the top nav to the left more and bring the logo into it.
Needs to be grided* a bit more.*grided - made up word meaning lacking structural conformaty.
- leftwave0
like this?
- johndiggity0
move that logo to the left arrange the images horizontally to the right of it, move the services columns to the left of the why choose arte section and give the areas some vertical spacing. think 4 columns.
- oldelpaso0
top nav range left or center
logo - leftthe contact # is gettng totally lost under the pics.. make a bigger deal of it - its the WHOLE point of the site (to get ppl to call them insnt it?)
personally i think the 2x2 isnt working.. i would line them across over the top nav and have them as decoration at the top. leaving an extra column free for more info
- Nairn0
i don't like the navigation at the top like that - the tightness and greyness are somehow sore on the eyes.
kinda looks like you've designed a page then gone "oh shit! the nav?!" and plonked it on.
not digging the transition from floaty italic serif to hard roman serif to futura-like sans-serif.
i'd try and stick more with the floaty italicised serif.grid it out a bit more, save the file and turn off your computer. Come back to it tomorrow and play with it a little - give it a bit of heart.
- leftwave0
is this better??
- Complexfruit0
is this better??
leftwave.com/indevelop...
leftwave
(May 18 07, 20:23)Yes!
What your are showing now is an improvement from your original post. Keep it up.
- oldelpaso0
much much better in IMHO
the squares now hint the grid a lot more than before.. its a start :)
theres little things like spacing between nav and squares than could be nudged a bit
the gray and dull blue are a bit... well.. dull :(
theres also little things like be careful he 'school' [under counselling] doesnt overshoot the edge of the grid
but yeah theres still a lot to be done
but it looks much better than when u started
- leftwave0
what would be a better color to to with the grey?