global warming critique
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- k0na_an0k0
Could be much better.
Lose the red stroke around the image, maybe find another image that illustrates global warming a bit better. That image says to me 'ah, a nice cold beach someplace with huge ice cubes for your margaritas'
Maybe it's the color scheme of red and yellow bit it looks really mid 80s workout video to me.
Check some of these for insp.
Good luck.
- walkman0
hiatus, I should have been more constructive.. sorry.
Witt did a good job.
i think because of the subject matter in this case, less = more.
(actually in most cases, less = more)
the photography on the package makes it feel sensationalized and cheap. especially smiley head. why's he so happy?I would have gone with solid colours and text only - high contrast.
- walkman0
oh - good examples Kona.
- canuck0
who is bradley whitford ?
- material-10
you know brad, drives a white ford
- k0na_an0k0
you know brad, drives a white ford
material
(Apr 10 07, 12:08)HAHA!
- ********0
why do all scientists without a beard look like carl sagan?
- hiatus0
The picture and the TT, is what I would have left.
the red line around the image is for "branding" so says my art/creative director.
The picture of brad is there on request of the client.
heres the first one I did.
- canuck0
I did some research into this bradley guy. Anyway, turns out he's not a scientist. He's some two-bit actor. Damn, this project get's worse and worse.
- PonyBoy0
Bradley Whitford was Adam Sandler's nemesis in Happy Gilmore.
I'm an asshole and an admitted fan of 'really dumb films' for knowing that. :)
Also...
I advise you burn the packaging and start over. :)
Question though... it's got some PBS markings on there - are you being forced into that dreadful red border?... is that something that comes on other boxes out of a series?
- 5timuli0
I reckon it should be more like this...
...with Mr Fucking Smiley Pants striking a gangsta pose.
- hiatus0
red line is a new thing as i mentioned. Brad on some big network hospital show now.
WHICH brings up an interesting point. whats so interesting about hospital dramas. Scrubs I don't mind cuz it funny.
- ********0
the 1st one was better, i think. just dish your art director.
- hiatus0
YOU MEAN, look for a better agency or steal his clients?;-)
- hiatus0
again the best thing about it i think is the TTreatment. if anything.
you should see some of the national geographic DVDs i've done......boring **yawn
- ********0
YOU MEAN, look for a better agency or steal his clients?;-)
hiatus
(Apr 10 07, 12:41)i mean both.
- hiatus0
YOU MEAN, look for a better agency or steal his clients?;-)
hiatus
(Apr 10 07, 12:41)i mean both.
Witt-NICE!!
has anyone , what am I saying. What is our approach to 'getting ' a new client..do you bait them with better prices....??