global warming critique
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- hiatus
what do you think??
- ninjasavant0
my suggestions:
remove the red line
rotate the supermarket sticker 45 degrees clockwise
weep gently for our dying planet
- walkman0
I'd be ashamed.
- hiatus0
walkman, just what I was thinking......Ha :-D
Actually i was thinking of putting it in my portfolio......stop laughing, i'm serious. :D
- version30
did you design that 15 years ago?
- material-10
needs more polar bear
- jox0
LMAO
I was just gonna say "Dude on the box looks like Bradley Whitford"
- ********0
bursting with high definition!
- ********0
don't do it dude.
- version30
so were you a pixel monkey on this one or is package design just not your thing?
it honestly looks like an 80's vhs box
- walkman0
sorry. i don't like being so harsh but...
- material-10
al gore wept
- version30
lemme see the other 3 sides
- walkman0
it almost looks like a comedy skit prop.
and if that's the case. by all means, use it. the yellow stroke around that smiley dude's picture really sells it.
- ********0
i think ill of opportunism.
- hiatus0
thats all i have for now,version5
- ********0
oh... you mean the box.
- walkman0
well that left a bad taste in my mouth.
- ninjasavant0
throw a couple lens flares at it and you're ready for production.
- ********0
i think the photo doesn't work - it is a small aperture shot with a strong "fleeting-point" (? bad english probably...) and it imposes on the upper level where the text is. a bigger landscape on a horizontal axis would glue it to the background.
I would also send the professor to the back - and tell him to look more sweaty ;)
- hiatus0
oh... you mean the box.
WittTHATS FUNNY
also walkman great comments!! HA :-D
I should have thought of the solar flares.....my "creative" director idea not mine. except for the Title Treatment, that was all me.
You guys think its such a joke...its nothing amazing obviously, but I think it very focused towards educational use. its nothing special! :-)
This package is at the printers....HA:-D