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- leftwave
i'm designing a new website for a book that is getting published. it's a cookbook geared towards single women, the category is "non-fiction chick lit":
http://leftwave.com/indevelopmen…
all feedback is welcome! thanks :)
- heavyt0
i like the apron analogy. i think it works well.
the wooden tools look out of place, they just kind of hang out in space for no reason.
personal preference, but i am not digging the Futura condensed. seems a little austere compared to teh rest of the site.
- -kappa-0
Love it but maybe the top of the apron and menu area is taking up too much real estate. Try minimise this but keep the concept.
I agree with the spoons. Loose em.
And the lower tiny verdana seems too small.
Nice work.
- akoni0
the wooden tools look out of place, they just kind of hang out in space for no reason.
- forcetwelve0
its too big up the top.
trim the boobs off errrrr
- Hewmiri0
I think the cookies and the fruit look too big compared to the plate. and agree about the top taking too much space.
- jamble0
My only real thought on it is that the white dashed line should go around the bottom of the page too. I think it'll just make it look a little tidier..
- leftwave0
thanks for the awesome feedback!
i guess i gotta lose the wood spoons. i just wanted to fill that space with something interesting.
as for reducing the size of the top area, can anyone think of a way to do that so the bottom area is still wide enough for all 3 columns?
thanks again!
- _salisae_0
why is the apron white?
- OSFA0
like it. perfect for your audience. Agree with the comments regarding the spoons. Great start.
- flavorful0
why is the apron white?
_salisae_
(Mar 29 07, 06:47)Isn’t it obvious?
He’s a racist.
- flavorful0
jamble has a great point, that would make sense.
salisae does too, is there a way to make the mini-apron at the top black?
Perhaps like a patchwork white border with blackstitch around it, kind of like ... I don’t know how someone might have “Kiss The Cook”, on the inside or something?
- rson0
hmm... masthead is way to big. I feel like the ribbon should be flush top fullscreen from left to right.
- OSFA0
why is the apron white?
_salisae_
(Mar 29 07, 06:47)Isn’t it obvious?
He’s a racist.
flavorful
(Mar 29 07, 06:50)HAHAHAHAHA!
- rson0
sorry but i feel like it is almost to campy. Single women are kind of hip. I think. Seems like more of a granny feel. whatever that means
- leftwave0
i'm a she :)
- _salisae_0
lol flavorful!
- RoomFive0
i like it - original, simple, clean, great stuff! :)
- leftwave0
sexist
- leftwave0
with spoons?
http://leftwave.com/indevelopmen…or, without?
http://leftwave.com/indevelopmen…
- _salisae_0
you have to change it to black .. that's almost as backward as the white michelen tire logo