westclox ad b2b
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- komkrktprod
critiques?
wip stage...
- monNom0
Rethink that photo. None of those clocks would work in that setting.
Type selection for the tagline needs to be reconsidered, those faces don't jive at all. maybe make 'time' stand out with a different colour. also, I think you're missing a comma, and ditch the exclaimation mark.
as for the products, they look really catalogue-y, which may or may not be a good thing depending on what this is for. I'd try a single column on the outside edge to give the photo some visibility. solid colour too, that opacity looks bad.
also, whatever image you select, may sure there's some open space for your tagline and logo, there's way to much contrast behind them currently.
- komkrktprod0
Thanks for the tips.
Will try a diff layout. image possibly...
re: the tagline, the client wants everything in script and TIME in a bold Sans Serif Font...what to do, what to do...
The products, really are whats being showcased... not so much the picture... but I will try a bedroom pic for this instead.