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- elms0
:)
- kelpie0
all of you hat0rz lay off janne, or im a come round your houses in the night and stranglate your kittinz.
ok?
- blaw0
geez... it's always about janne. a normal fellow can't even get a little wind in his sails around here.
*one of my cats is a real asshole. that would be the black one on the bottom floor, kelpie. please lock up on your way out.
- ********0
haha
- blaw0
cheers, dude. good weekend and all to you.
- elms0
apparently it reminded too much bubbles. so here's the next version:
vs the original:
- ********0
I haven't been in this thread since the beginning, but the next version is looking a lot cleaner.
Very nice!
- elms0
ah yes, and some extra text there also, what went missing...
- subversve0
i'm still a bigger fan of the original #1. i think the lights in the center of the 'bubble' detract from the continuity without adding the clarity you're hoping for. when a piece is this visually appealing, i don't really need to know that the circles are candle lights instead of bubbles. i just look at the whole and feel a sense of elegance and serenity, which i trust will fit in with the music.
- elms0
i'm still a bigger fan of the original #1. i think the lights in the center of the 'bubble' detract from the continuity without adding the clarity you're hoping for. when a piece is this visually appealing, i don't really need to know that the circles are candle lights instead of bubbles. i just look at the whole and feel a sense of elegance and serenity, which i trust will fit in with the music.
subversve
(Oct 9 06, 12:15)exactly... i would have choosed also the first one.
but i guess it was too "elegant" and clean. and it's hard to tell the client that i'm not going to change a thing, as it has to be ready for tomorrow and i'm quite tired. :/