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- Leissa
any constructive criticism would be hugely appreciated!!
thanks!
- lvl_130
your link is brokedn
- paraselene0
still broken...
- Chief0
forbidden
error 403
- Leissa0
damn. i'll have to put it somewhere else...
- Leissa0
ok, here's where the image lives:
http://leissaincanada.blogspot.c…
just click on it to see it full screen...
- Chimp0
I would make the icon next to the "You are not authorized to view this page" a bit bigger and bring the rest of the type down a point size.
Really love the "HTTP Error 403 - Forbidden
Internet Explorer "
- Leissa0
meh, its working here, over it...
thanks anyway.
:)
- Nairn0
Good on you! I'm a firm believer in the use of yellow on webpages.
Um, anyway..
- I'd change your leftNav buttonOn state - that yellow corner thing is kinda 1990s
- I'd tone down and lighten the greys - they're dulling the overall impact, imho.
- I'm 'not too keen' on the footer (the gradient's a bit naff) and I wonder whether you need the blue header strip at all?
- How are your first two body headlines actually going to line up? Like that?
- Have you tried angling your photograph a little?Otherwise - a good, clean & corporate job - Nice one!
Nairn,
Nit-picker and thrower of rocks from glass houses
- kelpie0
I'm going to be controversial and suggest darkening the grey instead, I think it'll make the yellows stand out more.
Kelpie,
Nit-picker and thrower of rocks at Nairn
- kelpie0
I'd probably play around with the sizes of the headers and nav text till I found something a bit less pixely too, that may be wishful thinking thoughm teh way these things go
- Nairn0
Or darken the grey, yeah. (grumble)
Ignore my angled photo comment - i see all the squares now.
Nairn
Picker of nits off'a kelpie and general flinger of shit