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  • Nairn0

    Good on you! I'm a firm believer in the use of yellow on webpages.

    Um, anyway..

    - I'd change your leftNav buttonOn state - that yellow corner thing is kinda 1990s
    - I'd tone down and lighten the greys - they're dulling the overall impact, imho.
    - I'm 'not too keen' on the footer (the gradient's a bit naff) and I wonder whether you need the blue header strip at all?
    - How are your first two body headlines actually going to line up? Like that?
    - Have you tried angling your photograph a little?

    Otherwise - a good, clean & corporate job - Nice one!

    Nairn,
    Nit-picker and thrower of rocks from glass houses

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