Logo Crit
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- Concrete
Interested in your opinions ppl.
http://www.imgdumb.com/viewer.ph…
Linkage courtesy of designerror.
Thanks
- radar0
is the stroke around it part of the logo?
- Concrete0
No.
- Jnr_Madison0
Did you do the font yourself?
- Jaline0
Did you do the font yourself?
Jnr_Madison
(May 26 06, 07:57)that is the question
- Nairn0
reminded me of cross-stitch when I first saw it and didn't think it very good.
The more I look at it, the more I like it, for some reason.
What's it for?
- Concrete0
Yeah, does it show?
- radar0
I would make it a bit bolder, the word concrete "hard, strong, conglomerate construction material" the type looks a bit frail
- spendogg0
i would like to see how it is used in the practical app. right now it looks like a vanilla clothing tag
- Concrete0
reminded me of cross-stitch when I first saw it and didn't think it very good.
The more I look at it, the more I like it, for some reason.
What's it for?
Nairn
(May 26 06, 08:00)My studio. Its time for new stationery!
- Shift5250
I would make it a bit bolder, the word concrete "hard, strong, conglomerate construction material" the type looks a bit frail
radar
(May 26 06, 08:01)i agree. not sure what you are using the word for, but right now it's not saying 'solid', 'strength' or anything close to what the word means.
- Nairn0
maybe that's the point? i kind of like the contrast, tbh.
as spendogg says, it'd be good to see how it's used, as it is quite flimsy on its own/hard to gauge..
- Shift5250
maybe that's the point? i kind of like the contrast, tbh.
as spendogg says, it'd be good to see how it's used, as it is quite flimsy on its own/hard to gauge..
Nairn
(May 26 06, 08:07)very true. but you can still push it a little further. maybe try seeing the word differently. don't be too literal. what meaning does the word have for you?
- Concrete0
I would make it a bit bolder, the word concrete "hard, strong, conglomerate construction material" the type looks a bit frail
radar
(May 26 06, 08:01)i agree. not sure what you are using the word for, but right now it's not saying 'solid', 'strength' or anything close to what the word means.
Shift525
(May 26 06, 08:05)I understand your comments.
But I like contrasts and contradictions in design.
- Shift5250
I would make it a bit bolder, the word concrete "hard, strong, conglomerate construction material" the type looks a bit frail
radar
(May 26 06, 08:01)i agree. not sure what you are using the word for, but right now it's not saying 'solid', 'strength' or anything close to what the word means.
Shift525
(May 26 06, 08:05)I understand your comments.
But I like contrasts and contradictions in design.
Concrete
(May 26 06, 08:12)as you were then.
- radar0
at the least I would make the tops of the C's match, one is angled and one is flat.
- _salisae_0
everyone is so nice
- Shift5250
everyone is so nice
_salisae_
(May 26 06, 08:18)i wanted to be a bit more direct, but he seems to have made up his mind on the direction he is heading. i don't know him, so i will play nice.
- Concrete0
at the least I would make the tops of the C's match, one is angled and one is flat.
radar
(May 26 06, 08:16)Thanks.
I didn't even see that.
- Concrete0
everyone is so nice
_salisae_
(May 26 06, 08:18)i wanted to be a bit more direct, but he seems to have made up his mind on the direction he is heading. i don't know him, so i will play nice.
Shift525
(May 26 06, 08:21)Be as mean as you wanna be.
I asked for a crit not a pat on the back.