Logo Crit
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- 4cY0
- fifty500
that website is rad.
Sven_sk
(Mar 14 06, 06:35)Uhh... yeah I only registered it a few days ago and I only just put the logo up there like yesterday. I merely posted the address because someone wanted to see the logo in one colour.
*runs and hides from blood-thirsty designers*
- skt0
It's nicer in one colour. But it is just an n in a circle. Doesn't really say nature or corner. In fact a circle / oval is the only shape you could have picked that doesn't have a corner.
- Sven_sk0
www.naturescorner.ca
fifty50
(Mar 14 06, 06:29)that website is rad.
i like the support copy seperate from the logo.
- 4cY0
it needs a lion on each side, holding swords...
and a unicorn on top.
also the date the company was founded, underneath, in all caps Trajan, in Latin ofcourse, starting with "est."
- radar0
If it's gonna be a stamp - why not critique it as one color then? You would get a better idea of what it would look like.
- fifty500
already thought of that rasko. The logo will be engraved into a stamp and will be hand-stamped onto bags, business cards, basically everything that it could be.
Meanwhile I'm convincing the client that "bakery & café" is just descriptive/support text and shouldn't be used with the logo all the time.
- rasko40
i think I would like to see a more crafted version, this looks like a second stage visual, I would expect more detail and more opf an organic/drawn feel to the elements, and it looks like it needs tightening up a bit.
my 2c
- fifty500
snuggles, you don't think the client already suggested that as a graphic to go inside the circle?
- mr_snuggles0
I'd like to see you try a version with a kitten...
- 4cY0
ok
- fifty500
@4cY: The white border was added because the logo will be used as a stamp, so all one colour, thus the white border being added around those three bits to separate them from the banner.
Other than that the colour scheme was not my personal favourite but the client chose it from over a dozen samples.
- fifty500
I don't understand the stick of rock with the n through it?
Engage
(Mar 14 06, 05:11)I don't understand the question.
- 4cY0
perhaps ditch the outlines on the leafs on the left. the color contrast is enough already...
it only causes problems recreating at tiny size and more work plotting/pasting and what not..
- PublikStar0
definitely outside
- Engage0
I don't understand the stick of rock with the n through it?
- blastofv0
outside for sure, for the sake of scalability...and why not follow the curve of the banner for the Bakery & Cafe bit? Might make it a bit less detached from the rest of the design
looks good
- Jnr_Madison0
Inside but I actually prefer the grey box you drew and the text to hold the logo more than the logo so what do I know.
- Engage0
its a cakey shoe, a shoe cake!