Logo Crit
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- fifty50
Hey guys and gals, I'm just finishing up a logo for a client and I would appreciate opinions. What I need to decide is where to place the text "Bakery & Café": inside the banner or below everything, detached from the logo.
Not sure if the client plans on using "bakery & café" with the logo all the time or not.
- determinedmoth0
I say outside.
- 4cY0
keep outside
- imakedesign0
keep outside
4cY
(Mar 14 06, 04:46)
- Dancer0
outside.
How about:Cafe 'n' bakery
;)
- fifty500
hah
- Engage0
its a cakey shoe, a shoe cake!
- Jnr_Madison0
Inside but I actually prefer the grey box you drew and the text to hold the logo more than the logo so what do I know.
- blastofv0
outside for sure, for the sake of scalability...and why not follow the curve of the banner for the Bakery & Cafe bit? Might make it a bit less detached from the rest of the design
looks good
- Engage0
I don't understand the stick of rock with the n through it?
- PublikStar0
definitely outside
- 4cY0
perhaps ditch the outlines on the leafs on the left. the color contrast is enough already...
it only causes problems recreating at tiny size and more work plotting/pasting and what not..
- fifty500
I don't understand the stick of rock with the n through it?
Engage
(Mar 14 06, 05:11)I don't understand the question.
- fifty500
@4cY: The white border was added because the logo will be used as a stamp, so all one colour, thus the white border being added around those three bits to separate them from the banner.
Other than that the colour scheme was not my personal favourite but the client chose it from over a dozen samples.
- 4cY0
ok
- mr_snuggles0
I'd like to see you try a version with a kitten...
- fifty500
snuggles, you don't think the client already suggested that as a graphic to go inside the circle?
- rasko40
i think I would like to see a more crafted version, this looks like a second stage visual, I would expect more detail and more opf an organic/drawn feel to the elements, and it looks like it needs tightening up a bit.
my 2c
- fifty500
already thought of that rasko. The logo will be engraved into a stamp and will be hand-stamped onto bags, business cards, basically everything that it could be.
Meanwhile I'm convincing the client that "bakery & café" is just descriptive/support text and shouldn't be used with the logo all the time.
- radar0
If it's gonna be a stamp - why not critique it as one color then? You would get a better idea of what it would look like.