Review my new design
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- BonRickles0
what is this, how you say..
the whiz bangs?
- johndiggity0
who's the dude on the bike? is that you? or is that a client who got moved by you?
- ********0
do you have a fro?
- _salisae_0
everything is crammed and it looks quite corporate. nothing stands out. well .. except the biker's ass.
- nooner0
doesn't seem very designerly.
the black and white trick is not very tricky either.
- magma0
i hate stock photography.
- ********0
I hate photography
- rrenfro0
you guys are pretty harsh... i'm going to add some flash to it, probably replacing the biker chic... that should spoof it up a little
- neal_s0
rrenfro - If you really would like the copy cleaned up, drop me a line (there's a link to my email and blog in my profile). I'd be happy to show you some stuff I've done and work out a deal.
- jevad0
why bother having all those services sublinks when they all go to the same page? Superfluous and annoying
- canuck_II0
you guys are pretty harsh... i'm going to add some flash to it, probably replacing the biker chic... that should spoof it up a little
rrenfro
(Mar 13 06, 18:51)Yeah, nt isn't the best place to get a crit sometimes. You have to weed through some of the posts.
Personally like I said, I find some parts of the site to be a bit tight. Also as was mentioned the blue color usage might want to be reworked. Especially the nav, it all just seems to get lost. too much blue.
Also don't just throw flash in for the sake of flash, maybe just rethink the image you have in the header.
Anyway goodluck, it just needs a tweaking.
- MLP0
every link on the side goes to teh same page. makes me think something is broken.
i say simplify your organization. break it up by services, then display your portfolio. this shows what you can do, through which you can show what you're available for.
why the b/w thumbnails?
everything seems very corporate and cold - stock photography, etc. maybe that's what you're going for, however.
- kyl30
How about showcasing a design that your proud of instead of the biker chick?
- rrenfro0
Yeah I was thinking of that
- jevad0
Do not think. Do.
- rrenfro0
Reworked some stuff - added a gradient bg and changed the side content. Going to be working on a flash animation that will rotate thru my porfolio. May take a few days on that - if I can get around to it. Thanks for all your help so far!
- SecretPenguin0
i love your sketches
- mynx0
Have you been getting design lessons from arseni?
- mr_snuggles0
It definitely screams 'web development' and whispers 'interactive design', you can take that as you will...