Logo crit
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- NRN0
I like it - agree with madirish and rasko though, the text isn't quite.. um.. energetic and ..um.. protesty. (?).
That last grey one you posted is awful - so trite!
- i_monk0
I thought the underwear megaphone was intentional. keep it. fix up the type though.
- ********0
Cheers people. Yeah, the last one I really don't like. Just the client does.
And yes the megaphone / underwear is intentional.
I'll work on the type. Was more of a concept test at this stage.
- ********0
Right, i'm having a total nightmare and am probably going backwards.
Here are some more. Your thoughts would be appreciated.
- mr_snuggles0
I should never have mentioned the stencil font...
01b is better, but the font isn't right, but I think it's the best of the lot...
- Bluejam0
either the megaphone needs to be more 3d or realistic
or
you try working on the 'to' in the spot version. wondering if a 'handwriten' or italic might help
?
- ********0
I should never have mentioned the stencil font...
mr_snuggles
(Mar 2 06, 12:12)Haha, I know. This job is shit, I need to have the logo and site designed by tonight and I am getting nowhere. And it's for a fucking charity. Cheap fucks.
- mr_snuggles0
then roll with 01b and change the type to helvetica or something fairly generic and move on...
I do like the simple graphic megaphone/knickers and the overall proportions of the logo...
- ********0
ok. unless you all tell me it's shit, i'm going with this. it would also be nice if some of you liked it.
Cheers mr snuggles by the way.
- i_monk0
03 - good, try it with a small TO or more leading, otherwise as-is.
- studderine0
hehe. this made me laugh.
- ********0
call me a tit or a twat or whatever, but i honestly liked the one where the words fly out better, so not aligned like you have them now. i like the font tho.
it should scream, sort of.
this is just boring clean typography for the sake of anal sterile designer-eyes.
remember who you design it for.
make it more playful.
rotate them again!
cheers.
- ********0
- kyl30
what do bunhuggers have to do with pants?
- ********0
they are related to the family of pants.
- dirtydesign0
I agree, the angled type worked much better. Just need a better megaphone image.
- ********0
this one still makes me laugh so hard, everytime i see this company's trucks on the road:
watch the logo.
the name literally translates to:
harepants. (it's the founders surname)..lol
- mr_snuggles0
Don't listen to them, it doesn't need to be so literal. But good call Janne, the onemen site is why I was thinking stencil font initially...
- who0
#02b
or
- heckpoktan0
i dunno