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- chossy0
5 :)
but do you have to have the stroke through the D? how does it look without it ? did you try that? have i got clothes on?
- ********0
5 is worth working up. In fact, it's almost there. still not sure about the d's relationship with the surrounding letters though.
- DavidFelt0
yeah five for me too, ill change the d around, maybe make it like the 'd' in six, how about the 'k' in six, would that transfer well you think, i think that 'k' kinda evens it up a bit
- kelpie0
5, definately - as for the K in 6, I'd need to see it with the thinner stroke to know, maybe the K could still use some work :)
- DavidFelt0
think the 'd' looks better now!
- kelpie0
hmm, don't know about that k...
D looks better, I can also see skt's point though - the words look a teeny bit like "sid etrak" at the mo. (might be picking nits though)
- ********0
yeah, d looks too close to the s and i compared to the e. It's the fact it touches the s that throws it I think.
- ********0
first time i've seen this and fcuking love it. excellent work.
- DavidFelt0
i see what you mean skt, hard to move the 'd' even further from the 's' though, kinda fucks it up, maybe i should redraw the 'e' so it links better with the 'd', but then id have to redraw the 'a' too.... hmmmm
thanks for the crit though guys, really appreciate your wisdom!
- ********0
I like this one.. give the same treatment as nr 7 and you are good to go
- Dancer0
You spelt "track "wrong
;)
Morning
- kelpie0
hah, you've been sitting there for 71 posts thinkin that up havn't you dancer? ;)
- Dancer0
haha
nah I jumped to the end as I knew there would be Version 16 (or smthg) by then, plus this looks like a "bumped" thread.Nice look and feel though Felt, not as fluid the original though.
Try harder damnit!!
- DavidFelt0
aye aye dancer, will do sarge!
- poomoo0
2, 3 and 5
- joqui0
i like 5 the best, because of the white spaces...
- DavidFelt0
Thanks to everyone for all the kind words, ill carry on chipping away at number 5 (seems to be the fav!) and post again lata!
- ********0
can't read it. but i guess the kids like it...
i feel it is so much similar to so many other logos though, the style at least.
not slagging you off, just saying.
- kelpie0
you're such a square, janne, you old fart ;)
- ********0
more like a rectangle.
;)