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- Chimp0
Hi Dave, I like the feel of it. Some of the smaller gaps between characters may be lost when it is reduced in size. I think the biggest problem is the 's'
- who0
I like this
I can easier understand the word...
nice work...
- agentfour0
i like the 'e' but it sorta looks like a lowercase 'a'.
the 'k' i think needs a rework
just the lower extension... maybe flip it horizontally.
- joqui0
i actually started of with the 'S' in your first version.. funny!
What's original nowadays anyway... :D
- DavidFelt0
i actually started of with the 'S' in your first version.. funny!
What's original nowadays anyway... :D
joquiDid it get on your nerves as much as this though? Its driving me crazy, gonna rework and maybe come up with a few new ideas, I kinda liked this one though! argh
- DavidFelt0
bit heavier, impressions please!
- ********0
Cheaper looking. Much.
- agentfour0
sorry now that 'k' is totally illegible.
- kelpie0
yeah looks too much like that font "pump". I read "sidetrak" at first glance btw dave.
- kelpie0
I have 20/10 vision though - like a fighter pilot, y'know?
- kelpie0
and a really big schlong.
- kelpie0
:P
- ********0
horses handbrake.
- kelpie0
it'll certainly stop traffic.
- DavidFelt0
So, weve all had a look at these early concepts, which, if any, are worth continuing?
personally i feel five is the better of the lot....
- kelpie0
stick em all on one jpg and lets have a look mate...
- ********0
Yeah. I'll be fucked if i'm working back through the thread finding all of them. Jeeez. Some people.
- chossy0
Don't ever call David 'Dave' ever again, don't wory davsies I got your back boyeeeee.
I agree with skt on the crit not in his lifestyle choice though 'He's a sex deviant ssshhhh'
- kelpie0
sorry Dave/Chossy ;(
please stick em on one though, I have a really bad short term memory and I tried to work back through them but my thoughts on 1 have left the building by the time I get to 5 :/
- DavidFelt0
easy tigers, give me chance, holy mother of Jesus and mary chain!