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- horton0
reads better.
but personally i think you could altogether lose the loop on the tail of teh "S" and finsih it to match the "K".
+ then as a bonus it'd feel like its on its "side".
nice work regardless.
horton
(Jan 19 06, 10:53)i'm sorry but couldn't resist a try, hope you don't mind :)
- horton0
haha! both the same.
your call. looks good either way.
- ********0
what if the s comes up into the i?
- DavidFelt0
Hey horton, whens the new website up at timegambril.com?
course i didnt mind, Id already done it though! getting late now though, might fuck off and call it a day soon!
- blastofv0
let's see it with the text so we can crit the logo in its entirety...?
- DavidFelt0
good idea! trying to choose a typeface though, im thinking 'pixely' or 'blocky', what you all think o' that then?
- horton0
Hey horton, whens the new website up at... ?
DavidFelt
(Jan 19 06, 11:03)christ. that's the million dollar question around here. i've sworn to myself in the next 6 months but getting nailed pretty hard with workload so i dunno. websites aren't my business so its a slow process.
- dirtydesign0
I liked the 'S' in the original, gave it that tape feel.
- DavidFelt0
Bump for the UK kids, gonna work some more on this today, any crit on any of the versions here appreciated!!!!!
- agentfour0
not feelin the 'k'
- DavidFelt0
yeah, the 's' and the 'k' seem to be the biggest trouble causers, cant seem to figure out 'exactly' what is wrong though!
- spongebob0
I thought it was "aidatrak" when I first saw it...
cater more to the function of bringing the brand name and logo strongly across rather than pleasing yourself I'd say.
- spongebob0
this one's better somehow... you tried extending the tail of 'S' all the way to the left?
- DavidFelt0
this one's better somehow... you tried extending the tail of 'S' all the way to the left?
spongebob
(Jan 20 06, 01:01)Like this sponebob:
?
mmm, Looks a little strange now, argh!
- DavidFelt0
not pointing any fingers ...
hhmmm ...
first logo ...
digilee
(Jan 20 06, 01:28)HAHA, i just saw that too!!!! hardly a new concept though this kind of thing is it!
- ********0
I think this is the strongest so far, but I would have a bit of room between the s and the i. Like the e and the t. Basically just move the s to the left 4 pixels. Although you would loose the connection between the s and d. Which might look shite.
- DavidFelt0
i think thats better skt, but do you think for continuity's sake i should introduc that gap between every letter?
- spongebob0
if you were to redo it and have to avoid that style all together, what would you come up with?
- ********0
I would space the s and d and the d and e.
The e and t and r and a look good joined though.