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- rasko40
Sainsbury's already do this actually.
Your product looks kinda nice, but when you look past the superficial and consider it properly it falls down in number of aspects. I actually despise products like this, its an utterly disgraceful waste of packaging and a complete ripoff but that aside lets continue.
You do not show POS which I think is ESSENTIAL with a product like this.
I cannot see what I am buying, unless I am buying a big curly typeface.
Are you only offering one recipe? Is this a vegetarian option?
You say this is a lamb recipe, so, is there lamb contained within this packaging? If so - how are you going to hang the product? How does the POS work now - do you have a special fridge? If not - so, I am basically buying a recipe and some chopped mushrooms and peppers?
And I can still not see my food!! Sorry but many people will not attempt to cook something if they cannot see what it will/should look like! What am I buying?
Why are you advertising a typeface with that alphabet image?
Why in your picture does it say pan fried lamb with peppers and mint and you have a piece of broccoli on there? Does it not make sense to have a pepper or some mint?!
I like your packaging but I think I am buying tennis balls not food, when I am buying food I am buying food, I am not buying fancy packaging and unless this food is ready to eat then I want to see what it is, and I want to know what other options are available and I want to know if it is vegetarian etc etc etc. Sorry but this is wide open, put some tennis balls in there and hang that up in a sports shop and you're ready to go.
Either that or do some serious rethinking. nicely presented mind you.