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- leftwave0
love the suggestions, thanks you guys.
spendogg, good call on the angle idea. i like it:
http://www.leftwave.com/nt/catLo…
- spendogg0
nice - lookin good.
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- subversve0
i like the direction, but i'm having some trouble with the negative shapes created within the bug. also, all of the elements seem to have about the same visual weight (including the negative space), and it makes the bug feel very static. maybe playing with the line weights of the three letters would help?
- subversve0
another note: although i like the top one the best, it doesn't give me impression of being stable (kinda feels like it wants to tip over), and maybe that's not the best impression for a company that builds buildings.
- kyl30
excellent advice subversive.
- jevad0
I'm not feeling that 'T'...if that makes any sense at all
- lnu0
//OT:
blue monday is the one with the dog right? I'm thinking of the one that goes "I used to think that the day would never come..." with all kinds of crazy people in it.
- Spanna0
I agree... the fact that it is on an angle is a worry for a builders/architects. I love love love the business cards though.
- ldww0
its kinda hard to see the A in the logo. atlteast if you are trying to make it read CAT. looks like a C an upside down C and a T. which is confusing.
what if the top brace of the T was a little lower, and the A had its own cross brace above the T? it would be more readable
- zaire0
Hey brah, how can I get a design job in da islands? North Carolina sucks.
- ldww0
brah. lol
you have been watching too much dog the bounty hunter
- zaire0
Or "North Shore" howly
- aliceblue0
I'm not feeling that 'T'...if that makes any sense at all
jevad(Aug 25 05, 22:55)
yeah ... the black outer "C"? is
kinda in your face.
(although it sorta feels better in the biz card)"architectural and builders"
sounds like "no so good english"
- jeedoubleu0
You have a million versions of the same logo... what u need to do is try something else, cause non of these seem to be working