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- leftwave
i just started a web design for a small startup specializing in organizing charitable events.
all feedback is welcome, thanks!
- kyl30
howza 'bout the link?
- slappy0
sounds good, what color is it?
- jevad0
omg link
- leftwave0
i'm soo sorry, that's twice in one week... LOL!!!
- jevad0
ease up on the line spacing sister
- kyl30
Good start, I like the colors but the layout right now is making a big H and seems awkward I'd lose the side patterns or use a white border then have the texture outside of that.
- leftwave0
jevad, good call - thanks.
kyl3, i'm not sure i know what you mean. like this?:
http://leftwave.com/indevelopmen…
- gfro0
Girl called, they want their logo back.
- leftwave0
actually, the logo was provided to me by the client. i'll let them know!
- jevad0
Also - align the html text with the 'a' and left justify it.
Too many weird spaces
- gfro0
any good waves lately?
- kyl30
yeah, that what i'm saying. I like that much better, usless you're going to have varying heights then i'd lock it to the top and go from there.
- toe_knee0
nice but too many font
- leftwave0
what's wrong with me, i like the weird spaces.
is this better?
- leftwave0
surf on this whole island has been FLAT!!!!! (gives me a good reason to work)
- slappy0
the girls toilet door sign wants their logo back from girlskateboards haha.
- leftwave0
haha, okok i'll have my client go to the bathroom after the skateboard company
- kyl30
I agree w/ toe_knee, try to stick to two fonts
- slappy0
the "learn more >> " lloks a bit crap, maybe make a funky button or something to draw a little more attention to it. Non anti aliased italics look yucky.
- leftwave0
yeah! great advice. thanks you guys.