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- k770
tight. i think it lacks a focus of color. like 5 colors for the navigation. it makes sense for purposes of navigation, maybe but you dilute brand message, imo
- RobotGunslinger0
yeah, it's nice, but the logo is going under.
- k770
going under?
- liquid0
not our logo....no choice in the matter....we personally like the logo....
colors? anything else?
- ********0
more space - more grid
- k770
more grid, yes
- liquid0
more grid? you got an overlay...?? this is set up on a grid kind of...
- ********0
show me your grid
- fresnobob0
My eyes move all over the place. Needs some focus. And some originality.
- NegativeSpace0
I get the feeling fresnobob thinks it needs a more effective grid.
- agentfour0
that yellow is kinda gross
- ********0
very corporate, just too rebelious, in the sense that, it lacks the ideaology, or that mentality, you know to be the drone, same color, blah blah blah, this is a corporate environment, and we wont have all those colors drone,
in other words
they'd tell you good job, and sneak your idea and just tone down the colors and make all the type bigger
one.
ps. i like it, but you are gonna get alot of those robotic machinery talk outa people flashin like that, ease up, and watch how they jaw drop....too much for them is unfortunately true, they cant take the future or past, only now
pps. good job, keep it up.
- ********0
ppps. i just read all of your replies
hahahahahahahahahaha
- liquid0
bump^ for the non-vampires
- jevad0
SHOW ME THE GRID!
- QuincyArcher0
it's nice. i like it...except their logo, but that's not your fault.
It's true that it lacks focus, but since each section is defined well enough, that doesn't seem to be a big problem in my mind.
- brandelec0
i like it
and the logo reminds me of fear factor!!
- canuck0
SHOW ME THE GRID!
jevad
(Jun 23 05, 09:14)jevad is the grid nazi :P
- iDp0
I think son has no idea where commas are supposed to go.
- brandelec0
ha, ha, ha