Business card crit
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- kld0
looks good Arthur. Did you try the trees bleeding in from just one side or a corner, just a thought.
BTW I was up in your neck of the woods over memorial day. Nice town Portland. Didn't have a lot of time for sight seeing(wedding) but we did go to the zen gardens and the coast. What area do you live in?
- jevad0
here's my asshole:
Nice - but the type is a bit blase....
like the colors and the tree illy...but I'd make the url smaller
Try a few diff. type treatments maybe...different weights and colors too?
my 2 cents
- Zero_Cool0
[Quote/mayo]
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LOL, mayo, your dick's smaller than your big head!
- mayo0
LOL, mayo, your dick's smaller than your big head!
Zero_Cool
(Jun 3 05, 11:30)hi Kettle!
- Fidget-design0
Your work is tight but your card is a litle dull I agree with what D_dot says perhaps go for a more abstract look and use a few more tones. Your type needs some work. Not a bad start though. This card does not sell your skills which you obviously have.
p.s Zero_cool you are one sad, bitter kid – you obviously were told HONESTLY about your work. People are constructive here, well that's what I've seen for the couple of months I have been here. Tit
- -ryan_harrell-0
front1 // back1
- arthur0
Thanks everyone. I appreciate the thoughtful responses. I'll keep working on it.
- piperboytoy0
I like them, but the fonts seems big.