Business card crit
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- arthur
Haven't had a business card for a couple years now. Please give me your thoughts:
Thanks.
- tim5250
like back 2. not sure about either front(s)
- gruntt0
noice.
i'd have to flip a dang coin on this one.
- nografik0
front 2 and back 2 ;)
- colza0
Front 1
Back 2nothing much to say.
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good work.
- gruntt0
use your last name first and do something naughty with it!
- imakedesign0
f2
b2the text position on the back does not sit well.
- dippy0
arthur, neither of those business cards accurately represent what you're capable of. Don't get me wrong, I think they're pretty good, but I've seen your work, and it'd be nice to see some of it on your card.
Unless you're limiting your inks, of course.
- Zero_Cool0
I have a tip for you buddy! Never ask anybody in this place what they think of your work as they all think there the bee's knee's.
Let's face it, opinions are like assholes, everybody's got one.
Peace
- save0
A. Mount .... hahaha
(sorry)
- arthur0
Thanks for the feedback.
arthur, neither of those business cards accurately represent what you're capable of. Don't get me wrong, I think they're pretty good, but I've seen your work, and it'd be nice to see some of it on your card.
Unless you're limiting your inks, of course.
dippy
(Jun 3 05, 11:16)I agree, but I'd like to keep the card rather neutral. I take on various types of illustrations jobs, and while they all contain my same style, they serve a wide variety of industries.
I'm open to any suggestions of different imagery. I feel they could be better as well.
- mayo0
from the choices i prefer front and back #1, though i would love to see "Arthur Mount Illustration, Inc." a tiny bit better. Maybe bump just that up a point or point and a half.
- mayo0
I have a tip for you buddy! Never ask anybody in this place what they think of your work as they all think there the bee's knee's.
Let's face it, opinions are like assholes, everybody's got one.
Peace
Zero_Cool
(Jun 3 05, 11:17)HONK! HONK! HONK!
Angry n00b alert! Angry n00b alert!HONK! HONK! HONK!
- arthur0
from the choices i prefer front and back #1, though i would love to see "Arthur Mount Illustration, Inc." a tiny bit better. Maybe bump just that up a point or point and a half.
mayo
(Jun 3 05, 11:19)I'm partial to this one as well, though most votes here are for the #2s. Good advice, I'll give it a shot.
- ********0
front 2 back 1
- D_Dot0
I say, Use an obscure zoomed in cropping of one of your favorite pieces as the back. Something with lots of detail but not quite distinguishable.
Nice work BTW
- mayo0
I like how the illustration in back1 breaks out of the card. It's exciting. Back2 seems too contained. That's why it doesn't appeal to me.
- kld0
looks good Arthur. Did you try the trees bleeding in from just one side or a corner, just a thought.
BTW I was up in your neck of the woods over memorial day. Nice town Portland. Didn't have a lot of time for sight seeing(wedding) but we did go to the zen gardens and the coast. What area do you live in?
- jevad0
here's my asshole:
Nice - but the type is a bit blase....
like the colors and the tree illy...but I'd make the url smaller
Try a few diff. type treatments maybe...different weights and colors too?
my 2 cents
- Zero_Cool0
[Quote/mayo]
HONK! HONK! HONK!
Angry n00b alert! Angry n00b alert!HONK! HONK! HONK!
[Quote/mayo]
LOL, mayo, your dick's smaller than your big head!
- mayo0
LOL, mayo, your dick's smaller than your big head!
Zero_Cool
(Jun 3 05, 11:30)hi Kettle!