Business card crit
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- -ryan_harrell-0
on back1 try that authurmount in the same yellow as the bg
- Neuarmy0
front 1, and definitely back 1 with the trees bleeding off, very nice.
- tkmeister0
i love your work but these business card designs don't show your talent... i know some already mentioned this. also, typography treatment can be a little more interesting.
but it's must be tough to design a card that has the same caliber of creativity you present in your work.
- BarryWhiteZombi0
Front 1 (possibly larger for arthur mount illustration), Back 1
- piperboytoy0
I like them, but the fonts seems big.
- arthur0
Thanks everyone. I appreciate the thoughtful responses. I'll keep working on it.
- -ryan_harrell-0
front1 // back1
- Fidget-design0
Your work is tight but your card is a litle dull I agree with what D_dot says perhaps go for a more abstract look and use a few more tones. Your type needs some work. Not a bad start though. This card does not sell your skills which you obviously have.
p.s Zero_cool you are one sad, bitter kid – you obviously were told HONESTLY about your work. People are constructive here, well that's what I've seen for the couple of months I have been here. Tit
- mayo0
LOL, mayo, your dick's smaller than your big head!
Zero_Cool
(Jun 3 05, 11:30)hi Kettle!
- Zero_Cool0
[Quote/mayo]
HONK! HONK! HONK!
Angry n00b alert! Angry n00b alert!HONK! HONK! HONK!
[Quote/mayo]
LOL, mayo, your dick's smaller than your big head!
- jevad0
here's my asshole:
Nice - but the type is a bit blase....
like the colors and the tree illy...but I'd make the url smaller
Try a few diff. type treatments maybe...different weights and colors too?
my 2 cents
- kld0
looks good Arthur. Did you try the trees bleeding in from just one side or a corner, just a thought.
BTW I was up in your neck of the woods over memorial day. Nice town Portland. Didn't have a lot of time for sight seeing(wedding) but we did go to the zen gardens and the coast. What area do you live in?
- mayo0
I like how the illustration in back1 breaks out of the card. It's exciting. Back2 seems too contained. That's why it doesn't appeal to me.
- D_Dot0
I say, Use an obscure zoomed in cropping of one of your favorite pieces as the back. Something with lots of detail but not quite distinguishable.
Nice work BTW
- todelete__20
front 2 back 1
- arthur0
from the choices i prefer front and back #1, though i would love to see "Arthur Mount Illustration, Inc." a tiny bit better. Maybe bump just that up a point or point and a half.
mayo
(Jun 3 05, 11:19)I'm partial to this one as well, though most votes here are for the #2s. Good advice, I'll give it a shot.
- mayo0
I have a tip for you buddy! Never ask anybody in this place what they think of your work as they all think there the bee's knee's.
Let's face it, opinions are like assholes, everybody's got one.
Peace
Zero_Cool
(Jun 3 05, 11:17)HONK! HONK! HONK!
Angry n00b alert! Angry n00b alert!HONK! HONK! HONK!
- mayo0
from the choices i prefer front and back #1, though i would love to see "Arthur Mount Illustration, Inc." a tiny bit better. Maybe bump just that up a point or point and a half.
- arthur0
Thanks for the feedback.
arthur, neither of those business cards accurately represent what you're capable of. Don't get me wrong, I think they're pretty good, but I've seen your work, and it'd be nice to see some of it on your card.
Unless you're limiting your inks, of course.
dippy
(Jun 3 05, 11:16)I agree, but I'd like to keep the card rather neutral. I take on various types of illustrations jobs, and while they all contain my same style, they serve a wide variety of industries.
I'm open to any suggestions of different imagery. I feel they could be better as well.
- save0
A. Mount .... hahaha
(sorry)