Business card crit
- Started 20 years ago
- Last post 20 years ago
- 28 Responses
- Fidget-design0
Your work is tight but your card is a litle dull I agree with what D_dot says perhaps go for a more abstract look and use a few more tones. Your type needs some work. Not a bad start though. This card does not sell your skills which you obviously have.
p.s Zero_cool you are one sad, bitter kid – you obviously were told HONESTLY about your work. People are constructive here, well that's what I've seen for the couple of months I have been here. Tit
- -ryan_harrell-0
front1 // back1
- arthur0
Thanks everyone. I appreciate the thoughtful responses. I'll keep working on it.
- piperboytoy0
I like them, but the fonts seems big.
- BarryWhiteZombi0
Front 1 (possibly larger for arthur mount illustration), Back 1
- tkmeister0
i love your work but these business card designs don't show your talent... i know some already mentioned this. also, typography treatment can be a little more interesting.
but it's must be tough to design a card that has the same caliber of creativity you present in your work.
- Neuarmy0
front 1, and definitely back 1 with the trees bleeding off, very nice.
- -ryan_harrell-0
on back1 try that authurmount in the same yellow as the bg