business card crit
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- warheros20
i see youve been snooping!
- toe_knee0
centre the ruler under your name
- save0
wank...
- edvc_van0
some of those othr logos look like babies with pacifiers or ears..... but that's just me....
- toe_knee0
centre the ruler under your name
toe_knee
(May 16 05, 01:39)
- edvc_van0
I like the space you had before between your address and your email.
Try centering the rule between your name and "graphic designer"
- warheros20
what do you mean? it's centered above 'graphic designer'?
- BillyBunter0
Your cards are the perfect remedy for a Monday morning.
Sorry I think they all stink.
Your trying too hard...
- warheros20
oh i get you.
- edvc_van0
The space between "PAUL HANGER" and the rule, is not the same as from the rule to "GRAPHIC DESIGNER"
- edvc_van0
Now I feel there's too much space in between them
- edvc_van0
but it's looking better everytime
- save0
vast improvement, work with number two, you don't need a logo
- warheros20
all right, thanks everyone. im going to bed now. workin on some more tomorrow.
peace
- edvc_van0
Why don't you move your name, the ruler and "graph..." closer together, and....
leave between "gra... de..." and "typography, print...", the same space yo have between your email and you address.
- warheros20
edvc_van, i actually just did that, but i closed everything and dont really feel like opening everything back up again.
and it's off to bed.
thanks again, guys!
- honest0
oddly enough, i am more interested in the white out on black handwriting of "business cards"